Reviews for Guilt
delicate monstrosities chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Hello,

I haven't read any "Elephant" fan fiction before but I'm glad I did. Your piece was lovely, and as others have said heart wrenching. It's a soft subject but you went there well.

-rusted
the-beginning-of-the-end chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
this was beautiful.

John and Eli were two of my favourtie characters, and i loved the way you portrayed them.

"He worked so hard on that portfolio and now he wasn’t ever going to use it…not to get in to college, not to win any awards, not to have around when he was older to remind him of what his pictures were like in high school…"

That line was so bittersweet and heartwrenching.

Hands down my favourite Elephant fic yet.

PS there's now a category under movies for Elephant, if you want to move your fic over there. Hopefully we'll get heaps more fic for this movie :]
Ermine aka Tree chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Poor John. :( I know I've said this a million times, but you're amazing with character emotions.
SCOTLAN chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Now i have to see the blasted movie! SHEESHER!

*love*

I liked it though.