|Reviews for Child of Atlantis|
| Mara-DragonMaster chapter 26 . 7/23/2009
So sorry it has been so long since I reviewed. I now have a little boy of my own, almost a year old, and somehow I have less time than I used to, to read and enjoy fanfiction! :-) I actually had to go back and reread at least 5 chapters to remind myself of what was going on in Charin's crazy life!
Wow! Wonderful way to conclude the story. I LOVED the scene where Charin defeats Oberoth and the replicators! That was so awesome! You did a wonderful job, all the way through the story, of matching the way Charin talked to her new ages, although she did often talk more like a grownup than she should have. A wise, older-than-her-years girl, indeed! I am glad she gets to live like a normal girl now. And I love the name you chose for her baby brother.
To conclude: wonderful job, great renditions of the characters, and excellent tying together of all the threads at the end! It did not feel like anything was left unexplained, or that it ended too quickly.
Really enjoyed reading!
Thank you, and God bless!
| The Disappeared chapter 26 . 1/16/2009
YES! Amazing fic! It was WONDEROUS! Great job - very original plot! Great fic!
| me chapter 26 . 8/16/2008
omg, i loved this story well done, you are a great writer
| AtlantisCat101 chapter 26 . 6/25/2008
OMG i couldnt stop reading this!
| AtlantisCat101 chapter 10 . 6/24/2008
| AtlantisCat101 chapter 7 . 6/24/2008
i liked this chapter. and shes still a 3 year old in this chap right? she sounds like a very polite (very VERY polite) 10 year old or sumtine
| AtlantisCat101 chapter 4 . 6/24/2008
OMG! i LOVE this story!
| TubaPrincess chapter 26 . 6/17/2008
What a beautiful ending to this story! I know you finished awhile ago, but I felt the need to review anyway :) I love the anticipation throughout the chapter and the fun family moment at the end. It's perfect!
| Bugginkrd chapter 26 . 5/29/2008
This was an amazing journey and a fitting end. Thank you so much for sharing your incredible writings with us. I hope to read more adventures from you. I look forward to you doing the beta on my story. Again, thank you.
| Triangulum chapter 26 . 5/26/2008
This amazing! Best SGA author i have read in a long time
| Bunnylass chapter 26 . 5/24/2008
Aw, what cute, fluffy, adorable ending!
It was really sweet. I love the babe's name, Alaka'i, its fantastic.
I really enjoyed this one, it was brilliant as always.
Thanks for posting it : )
| Dia chapter 26 . 5/23/2008
hope you don't mind, but i'm doubling this one. i thought it didn't seem right to not address the fic as a whole, so that's what i'm doing.
this was SUCH a good idea! than again, most of yours all. (i was going to say "all", but that's a dangerous word. i'm sure that you've had crappy ones here and there.) oyu're just REALLY good at this stuff.
each each of you fics has more and more twists. more and more crazy happenings that i woulnd't expect. this one is no acception. it was an incredible literary masterpeice.
although nanites are a real thing, (although they should be with all the talking we've been doing about them! [does that make sense? it doens't look like english.]) you sure seems to be REALLY good with them. you make rules about them that make senes. well, growing twice your size overnight is hinky, but the repecussions brought it back down to ear- erm- Atlantis?
POV's you did an EXCELLANT work with them! this was definately one of my FAVORITE prologues ever! and i also adored the times in which the nanites spoke! it was just marvelous! (wow! i'm NOT using that word again! i felt like such an- old, rich lady or something. that was NOT the right context. i bet you're wondering why i didn't hit "backspace." that's because it still appied and i hardly ever erase anything in a review!) you used the voices of every characture to add new levels to the story. but you did more, you- changed them, too. not that you changed their personalaties. more like you evolved them to slightly different people. the kinds of people that they WOULD be in this reality. i liked that a lot, too.
it had a very nice flow, too. it was as if you felt the story, knowing when it needed to "Breathe" and when it needed a major plot-twist.
this is dripping with good plots, POV's, charactures, and twists. you're a master artist! you're good at what you do! I think i speak for a lot of people when i thank you for blessing us with this amazing story. the time, thought, and sore hands(and brain) are all much appreciated! thank you!
| dia chapter 26 . 5/23/2008
i'm going to rush this review because it's alreadey late, there are a thousand other htings to talk about, and we haven't talking in FOREVER! (okay, 36 hours, but still)
VERY FLUFFY! I'm trying to figure out how to say what i'm thinking. it isn't something that you'd see on the show, but you made it pretty good. it's . . . ooc, but in a good way. like. . . like being together brings out a whole new side of them. like they've been holding their feeling about everything in for all of their lives and now they're open to say stupid, gushy stuff. it was pretty good. (yes, that was a compliment.)
next, the birth. wow. idky, but i thought it would be right after, not during/after. not that it's that big of a diff, but it felt like it. you always keep me on my toes. Charin. she's so awesome! i love her! so nervous. it's like she's the father or something. i love it. and thank you for sticking to our creed of never writing birth scenes from in the room.
YAY! he's born! and he's a he! and you gave her a sibling! that's probably what i'm happiest about. not that they actually have a kid of their own or that he's healthy and finally out. i'm most happy that she has a brother. although she's forever older than him. yeah, they'll TOTALLY have to have another kid to give him a friend his ish age.
LOVED it! i thought the name was Egyptian until i read the thingy. good choice and i LOVE the meaning! REALLY good chap and good choice of POV's and . . . when you wrote it, too. right before. i liked that! thank you!
| SpaceMonkey0941 chapter 26 . 5/23/2008
Aww! Alaka'i is such a great name! Well done.
What a great story this was! I loved it from start to finish! I can't wait for the next chapter of Soul Mates, either!
| CanadianHalliwell chapter 26 . 5/23/2008
That was a beautiful ending to a great story. I hope you write a sequel about the antics of the Dex children!