Reviews for The Forsaken
SandyLee Potts chapter 7 . 6/2/2013
Thank you for writing such an awesome story. I know you've written one more primeval which I intend on reading, but wonders if you could write more.

Super story. I loved Connor the hero and wished we could have more of this Heroic Connor.
beckerandjess4eva chapter 3 . 9/9/2011
ooohh... i think that chapter was very good, very good plot and i enjoy the way you write. Good chapter
beckerandjess4eva chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
love it!
Gemma72 chapter 7 . 8/29/2011
This is a great story. Love a bad ass Connor!
edwardfiend chapter 7 . 8/25/2011
Really really liked this. :D
aunteeneenah chapter 7 . 7/20/2011
"A strange yellow mess seemed to be growing from his arm" LMAO! I loved this. It was exciting and really showcased what Connor could be . . .not the weakling who has to be protected, but a man of action who can take care of himself and everyone around him. God job, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
aunteeneenah chapter 6 . 7/20/2011
I was a tad confused but figured it out. Must finish . . .
aunteeneenah chapter 3 . 7/20/2011
aunteeneenah chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
I decided to start at the oldest stories and work myself to the present and I'm glad I did. This is a great start and if the rest of this is as good as the beginning, I'm gonna be a really happy camper! I'm hooked and have to keep reading.
ebuchala chapter 7 . 5/12/2011
Excellent story! Great pace, good characterization and lots of action-thoroughly enjoyed it. I know this is several years late but, although I've been watching Primeval for a couple of years now, Primeval fanfic never crossed my mind until recently.
TheRandomOneStaringAtYou chapter 7 . 1/2/2011
and i didnt review this one either! bloody hell what am i like! considering this is one of my fav primeval stories ever... it's insane! ridiculous. you should be a writer. amazingnessssss i could go on... i could gush for hours in fact.. but it's late so i wont. more primeval stories please! :) xx
fullhans1 chapter 7 . 4/10/2010
Good story.
mw chapter 7 . 12/18/2009
*standing ovation* fantastic! best connor story i've read! loved every word thanks!
mw chapter 3 . 12/18/2009
freaking awesome so far! love where connor has been and what happened to him fantastic whump! reading on...
dinosaurbreakfast chapter 7 . 9/21/2009
Its a bit late so excuse me if I'm not coherent.

I loved this fic, it was absolutely brilliant, and quite honestly one of the best, most creative 'Primeval' peices I've read. I wish they all could be like this. I was truly excited. You wrote the characters all extremely well and believably. My question is: what are you doing in fanfiction? Go write a novel!
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