|Reviews for The way back|
| sxpnce chapter 2 . 6/18/2010
Great back and forth bantering! My heart kind of hurts for these two.
| GiGi chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
Thanks for the french! It's so good!
Your FF are so great :)
| swan0456 chapter 21 . 6/9/2010
Your story was great I loved Bella's smart mouth.
| ssarrahh chapter 21 . 6/5/2010
Yeah for HEA! I'm so happy these crazy kids could finally figure out they were meant for each other. It was a really great story. I'm glad you decided to continue on with this sequel. Everything feels complete now:]
| OlYMPICOVEN chapter 21 . 5/26/2010
| ILoveYou95 chapter 21 . 5/20/2010
I really loved this story and the fist. I don't know what its was about them I just did. :)
| Isao84 chapter 21 . 5/10/2010
Ok. First of all. I've been reading a hell of a lot of this. And your's by far the wittiest. Def in my top 3. It really feels like a sarcasm match. It's very well written. I don't like the title that much it's self explanatory but I feel doesn't have your zas. The first time they sleep together I feel the wat you express with how
he felt against her chest was a bit crass... Maybe to
It caught me off guard. And when she gives the speech(which was brilliant) She holds the mic not the mike.
You NEED to channel that brilliance into a script or a novel. I cannot wait to read something of yours again.
| Creamed Cheese chapter 21 . 5/1/2010
wow really liked it ]
| Ellinor chapter 21 . 4/29/2010
I just loved, loved the story; the characters, the plot, the humour, the language... You truly know and own the words.
| Erin chapter 21 . 4/13/2010
I love this story and the first one but the second was so much better i love that they were grown up now and how they should be togther. When edward came to her apartment after lunch with karen it was so so sweet and when he said he was heart boken too! The ending was perfect and i loved loved it a book of this would be so AMAZING!
| Judith chapter 21 . 4/8/2010
WOW! Thank you for sharing this story, (RITE OF PASSAGE AND THE WAY BACK) on the internet so that priveleged readers like myself might have access to it. I refer to it as one story because to me, that's what it is. It is complete,whole, together. The story comes full circle. I wonder though, why you chose to submit it as a TWILIGHT FANFIC and not simply give the characters their own identities. The story deserves to be published in it' own right. Yes, there would need to be some additional character development, but I can't see that as much of an obstacle. Having read the TWILIGHT series, (multiple times), as well as the complete HARRY POTTER, I assert that this story is better! Of course, the mature subject matter and language might preclude it from mainstream acceptance, and definitely the young reader market. However, the work has merrit. It has a point of view and it speaks to the reader. If you do publish, I only hope that it is not thrown into the romance novel category. While I'm sure that they make plenty of money for their authors, again, this story is better than that classification. I have a 13 y/o niece and I am seriously considering allowing her to read it, I think she would benifit from it. I am sure I will read it again! Thank you and I look forward to reading your other works.
| twilightlover chapter 5 . 4/5/2010
i think ive seen that movie but it was before i became obsessed with all things french umm maybe ill watch it again! They are so funny i wish I had an Edward
| twilightlover chapter 2 . 4/5/2010
Ive already read the story once but is so good i keep coming back!
| Ashlie Christine chapter 21 . 4/5/2010
Couldnt have asked for a better ending! Absolutly luved it! It was wonderfull! :)
| SparksZ chapter 21 . 4/1/2010
I just read the 2 stories in 2 days... It's that good.
I LOVED the banter between your characters. I was laughing out loud all the time, which I never normally do. You are a master of wit.
The interactions between them were some of the best I've read in fic & I've read a lot.
I do so hope you continue to write stories because you have talent.
I would love a third installment, but as you say, there really isn't anywhere to go. So it's with great sadness I say goodbye to these characters, & thank you to you for writing them.