Reviews for The way back
sherry williams chapter 8 . 1/8/2011


bella should have slapped that bitch. she had NO right saying what she did to bella and edward. i glad she broke-up edward she didnt need to be with him in the frist place. edward should be with bella and hopefully they can make it this time.

love love love it
sherry williams chapter 7 . 1/8/2011

poor bella

she was getting time alone with edward and maybe they could talk about them and work stuff out

still love the story
sherry williams chapter 6 . 1/8/2011

they are still so in love with each other it isnt funny

still love it
sherry williams chapter 5 . 1/8/2011

here we go again

love the story
sherry williams chapter 4 . 1/8/2011

poor B&E

im glad they are talking again

still love the story
sherry williams chapter 3 . 1/8/2011

poor bella

still love the story
sherry williams chapter 2 . 1/8/2011

poor B&E

they still love one another

still love the story
sherry williams chapter 1 . 1/8/2011

i dont understand so are they still together

still love the story
cat5050 chapter 21 . 12/28/2010
Thank you darling for this delight. Enough challenge in there between your characters. Great witty diatribes. Hurt and defenses and love with the HEA.

that/than of/to from/form errors often interspersed herein

But your story held its own.
cat5050 chapter 17 . 12/28/2010
Great chapter. A bachelorette party anyone would love. Perfect delightful friends who listen, actually hear and answer. Great end with Emmett and Bella and then Edward too.
cat5050 chapter 8 . 12/28/2010
Maybe, but I still want MORE. So glad I found this already complete! lol
cat5050 chapter 3 . 12/23/2010
Love it-light, witty. That love lost theme hanging behind it all.
cat5050 chapter 2 . 12/23/2010
Ouch-this really hurts. First, they broke up when I went for HEA after the first one, him connected to her ankle and all! Now it seems a bit bitter.

I shiver - and then head on to the next.
KatyDarling chapter 21 . 12/13/2010
That was wonderful! I love it! Thank you for putting a silly grin to my face, especially after reading these lines -

"And now, I can tell you no one, not even you, will prevent me from having you in my bed every night until the day I die. You are my friend, my best friend, my lover and the only woman I want to have children with. You make me feel like a man and like a kid in an insane roller coaster every frigging day; I can be cocky and confident and be reduced to humility and guiltiness with one of your words. And I don't want anything different. I'd like, if you grant me this wish, to be able to call you 'wife' as well."

I hate for their journey to end but I know it has to come. So pleased with their HEA. Thank you for that! :)

You're a good writer! Will you please write some more? pretty please? chapter 21 . 11/29/2010
The ending you gave to them was just perfect for them and truely beautiful...i love this story alot...i cried soo much in the chapter where bella goes to the graveyard and this chapter was making me all emotional too...thankyou for writing soemthing this great...i really enjoyed reading it :D
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