You have managed the impossible - a sequel that is as good if not better than the original. I will come back to this one again and again. Thank you

This was absolutely AMAZING & BRILLIANT! I just loved it!

just as good the 3rd time;)

Let me tell you one thing, I had never imagined that they would be breaking up at the start of the sequel. But now in hindsight I think I should have seen it coming. It was heartbreaking to read about their separation but I'm glad that at the end Edward did built a house for Bella despite the fact that he is an architect not a builder. I noticed how Bella stated talking like a normal person, keeping the quotes and references at bay.(It was quite hard to follow her sometimes in 'the rite of passage' considering the fact that I don't belong to this culture or country.)
I loved the sequel more than the previous story but that doesn't mean that the previous fic wasn't good. It's special in its own way. During the initial chapters I was afraid that the both of them won't make it but I'm glad you proved me wrong. When Emmett confronted Bella I was furious with him for trying to create a rift between my favourite couple. Even I wanted to punch him in the face. That's why I loved Patrick because he was the only person who pushed Bella to give in. If there is anyone I love after Edward then it has to be Patrick. That guy is so sweet. Speaking of Edward I don't think I need to say it out loud that I love that guy. He has had my heart since the beginning, no one can take his place. If there is anyone who can match Bella's ferocity and complement her it is Edward. I loved their banter and enjoyed reading it a lot. As for Bella, without her this fic wouldn't have taken place. I really loved this story and I'm happy that both of them would finally have their Edgar, Allan, Poe and Lenore. Claude would be so jealous.*winks**chuckles*
Thanks for sharing this wonderfully amazing fic with us.

Thanks so much, my heart did the ache. remembering what it felt like when you find out your first love had replaced you. Even after being married to a brilliant man for 10 years. You never forget that feeling. Very well written thankyou cheers meg. X

THATS NOT FAIR WE DONT KNOW WHAT THEY HAD A BOY OR GIRL. YOUR WRONG ABOUT WRTTING A SEQUEL IT REALLY IS NEEDED BUT I WILL LET YOU FIGURE THAT OUT ON YOUR OWN AND HOPEFUL YOU WILL BECAUSE THEY WILL LINGER IN YOUR IND AND OURS TILL YOU DO PLEASE THINK ABOUT IT THANK YOU I LOVED THIS STORY. THANK YOU

SEE DARLENBYOU ARE JUT NOW GETTING TO THE GOOD PART OF THIS STORY YOU CANT END IT IN ONE CHAPTER YOU HAVE TO WRITE A THIRD PART ITS NOT FAIR IF YOU DONT PLEASE THANK YOU.

I WANT THEM TO ADMIT THEY LOVE EACH OTHER AND WANT TO BE MARRIED AND HAVE HIS BABIES AND THE HOUSE HE DESIGNED FOR THEM FOREVER

FOR GOD SAKES WOMAN TELL HIM YOU ALWAYS LOVED HIM JUST HIM NO ONE OR ANYTHING ELSE

ITS NICE TO BE WITH SOMEONE AND SHARE MEMORIES THATS NICE.

JUST WHEN THE HELL IS HE GOING TO ASK HER TO MARRY HIM IF THIS KEEPS UP YOUR GOING TO HAVE TO WRITE ANOTHER SEQUEL FOR THEIR WEDDING AND MARRIED LIFE BUT THAT WOULD BE GREAT TOO THINKBABOUT IT NOW

COME ON I WANT TO HEAR THIS STORY AS TO WHY THEY BROKE UP PLEASE TELL US

OK THEY WILL BE MAKING PLANS TO GO HOME AND THINK ABOUT MOVING IN WITH EACH OTHER GUESS WE WILL WAIT AND SEE HOPE HE BOUGHT THAT RING SHE LIKED DONT YOU

SO NOW THEY KNOW THERE IS SOMETHING GOING ON BETWEEN EDWARD AND BELLA JUST NOT WHAT AND THEY WONT BE BRINGING DATES TO HER WEDDING GREAT

WHY DONT EVERYONE TEND TO THEIR OWN BUSINESS AND LEAVE EDWARD AND BELLA ALONE TO TEND TO THEIR OWN BUSINESS