|Reviews for The Phantom of Atlantis|
| Mrs Rosemary Weir chapter 37 . 9/2/2009
Really good! I hope that when Liz gets back some romance will pop up right? Update soon.
| Beth5572 chapter 37 . 9/2/2009
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.
| Mrs Rosemary Weir chapter 36 . 8/22/2009
That makes sense! Please update soon!
| SchroedingersKat chapter 36 . 8/8/2009
Nice chapter, though its a pity that John didn't manage to stop Ford. Sumner also seems to be more accepting of John now so yay him!
| Serran chapter 36 . 8/7/2009
Ok, first of, I like this story, even if the attempts to make romance part of the plot are pretty bad. I do understand that John and Elizabeth are attracted to one another in this story.
It is a good idea, plausible but the execution leaves a lot to be desired.
They are not fifteen, period.
Until now I could even accept that Sumner and the Phantom were at odd's. It is an idea that can only exist through a lot of handwaving in the plot, and not in the 'plotdevice' like the timejumper when the Expedition arrives in Atlantis the first time. More like, lets throw everything we have ever learned about alien diplomacy and reasoning out of the window to, quite frankly, let an mentally inflexible Colonel have his moronic 'by the book' way at a place where the book is worth less then toilet paper.
But that this situation persists even now, with General O'Neill's direct order against it, makes it necessary for me to say something.
To the Atlantis expedition the Phantom is an alien opperative of unkown origin who they have antagonized at every opportunity, invaded his home, woken up his enemy's, hindered him at fighting these enemy's, attacked him and generally being an asshole towards. And he is still helping and protecting them, has not retailed (despite the fact that he could have propably killed them all for invading his home alone, not to mention the grief they caused him) and generally been a really nice guy.
The SGC has made alliances with others where the circumstances were a lot worse while they were solelie a military operation.
The Atlantis expedition is a civilian opperation, led by a civilian to discover new tech. Nowhere did they expect to have to fight a new war. And given their leader's experience with alien diplomacie and general world ending crises management all calls regarding alien contact bar the immediate encounter is her decision and her's alone.
Sumner has authority when she say's he does, and despite what he may bluster that is the way such an operation would be and was organized in the SG-verse.
If Sumner comes back to Atlanitis at all with what he just did, and his general conduct over the year, then without his bird.
I just checked, didn't I already put a review to this story, saying it is a pretty good one, only with plot and logic holes big enough to fly a cityship through?
| Blanche chapter 35 . 7/6/2009
great! :) I'm hopeing for more ;) Liked the chapter.
John beeing there 20 years? hmm can't wait for that conclusion.
| Mrs Rosemary Weir chapter 35 . 7/6/2009
Good! I hope that there will be more romance coming up! Please update soon!
| Dugleik chapter 35 . 7/6/2009
| blanche chapter 34 . 6/23/2009
nice :) glad you still keep going. Liked the chapter ;) hoping for more!
| Mrs Rosemary Weir chapter 34 . 6/22/2009
WOW Summner actually gives John... I mean the Phantom some respect! Great chapter! Not as good as the rest but still great! Can't wait for Conversion or the Long Goodbye! Quick question though, did Before I Sleep actually happen in this AU? Just a quickie.
| SchroedingersKat chapter 34 . 6/22/2009
Cool chapter, liked the little bit of wraith hunting!
| Shadows-of-Realm chapter 33 . 6/14/2009
Tut Tut! This colonels get annoying don't they!
Great chapter! Keep it coming!
| Mrs Rosemary Weir chapter 33 . 5/18/2009
I'm guessing that after the siege there will be more romance going on? Great chapter, a little boring but you've got to follow it through and through.
| Dragonsdaughter1 chapter 33 . 5/18/2009
| Shadows-of-Realm chapter 32 . 4/27/2009
Great chapter, thanks for the update, it was a little sooner than expected, no?
Keep them coming along quickly! :))