|Reviews for Halcyon|
| snappleducated chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
If he closes his eyes, he can almost feel the storm brewing at the tip of his tongue. It’s deliciously cold and numbing.
That's a lovely line. I adore ADORE the way you describe the storm in such a soft, waiting way.
Also, poem in the middle? If you wrote that, you're freaking talented. If not, you have good taste.
HURRAY FOR SWEET, QUIET MOMENTS!
Lovely work, hee.
I am a lame reviewer, sorry.