|Reviews for Love Note|
| Derich chapter 3 . 7/19
... I pity L in advance.
Great idea by the way
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/13
Not much Ranma in this fic. I don't mean just Ranma the character. I mean the whole flavor of Ranma the series. I stopped reading partway in this chapter. It's not bad writing as such, but it's not Ranma and not really fun, exciting or anything.
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/29
This is a great crossover
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/29
| Ganheim chapter 18 . 1/12
hearing it's origin
for the others."
[Invitations should still have a question mark]
Cupid wants to hid
situation is spirally out
have any idea-"
[Even interrupted, questions need their mark]
Pretty good as far as character, plot flow, and there's more character conflict/interaction so I like it.
| Hiryo chapter 18 . 11/1/2017
Thanks heaps for this update!
Again nice to read good Ranma fanfic!
| Unchanined chapter 17 . 10/18/2017
How... How did you make such a silly premise like love note work as good as the original death note?! How?!
| Treant Balewood chapter 17 . 5/27/2017
Really enjoying this story, Thanks for Writing!
| Ganheim chapter 17 . 5/3/2017
uprising of there's,
with a incoherent
from each exitted
an attire crew decimated
[entire? Or is he referring to tailors?]
Have to dealt
and a over used white
Great to see you’ve found inspiration again. I spotted a couple small technical flaws but I’m still interested to see where things go. Happy writing.
| jhbratva chapter 17 . 4/27/2017
Your story has been updated right after my birthday! never thought I'd see the day
| lordkalel chapter 17 . 4/22/2017
I hace to say that I'm amazed to see a new chapter, and I have to ask, do you know that there is a manga/anime series with the concept of the Love note?
| Ganheim chapter 16 . 12/6/2016
Have you fun
full glass exterior…from the exterior
[Repetition two sentences in a row. “outside” would’ve worked on the second]
Cologne exited such…exiting the building
[Repetition. Perhaps ‘heading for the bus station’ if you want to emphasize that she’s going somewhere other than inside?]
Maho had just arrived
[arrived is past tense without ‘had’, that’s an unneeded word that only adds passivity]
book shelf opened
was 1 more guest
[Other than large numbers (years qualify), numbers should be written out in narrative or dialog]
all smiles and seemed absolutely riveted
[I’d think she would seem unperturbed…the only such one there, as the others all are biased with hostile accusations or such. Kasumi, from last indication if I read right, wouldn’t remember and care]
her eye cause
they too quickly took notice
[they too noticed]
and dazed expression
[expressions (to maintain number)]
not previe to
[A megalomaniac…to maintain the phrasing Kasumi started]
"L, I have
[There are too many active participants in the scene not to identify who is speaking. The sooner, the better]
bandages cover all
Amusing, certainly. I’m glad you found your inspiration again.
| Fourtoes chapter 16 . 11/16/2016
I only read this since I loved "A Scary Thought". To be honest, I regret taking so long to give this a read. I loved it!
| ranma-saotome-cursed-fighter chapter 16 . 11/7/2016
Mariko Konjo, martial arts cheerleader... that lesser known characters since they don't make more than one appearance. Doesn't hurt to own the whole ranma 1/2 collection manga/ anime. Still keep writing it gives me something to read.
| phoenixir chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
Hah! Nice try! You can't hide Love Tyrant from Me!