|Reviews for Pity|
| Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
You did an amazing job of capturing Mrs. Lovett.
| Snezhinka chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
Oh, I do hate Mrs. Lovett. Poor Lucy. I love how you show Mrs. L's point of view and her thoughts :-)
| nomorehere chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
A very eerie, and believable, take on how Johanna and Lucy got to the states they were in.
| Darkstar10 chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
I loved it. This was amazing and well written. Well done!
| Miss Malfaisant chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
That Mrs. Lovett is a bloody wonder.
I cried during the Benjamin scene, shamefully.
Keep it up, love.
| Sassy Lil Scorpio chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Very good fic. I like how you explained how Mrs. Lovett knew about the razors and her utter disdain and disgust with Lucy. I also like how you painted Mrs. Lovett as someone who is hardened by life. This stood out when you wrote about how she didn't cry when her husband and baby died, or how having another baby might kill her. Interestingly enough, she cried the night Benjamin Barker was taken to prison-at night, when she heard Lucy crying, and in private. Maybe that explains why Mrs. Lovett is drawn to Sweeney Todd because she understands how life can harden a person. At the same time, I feel compassion for Lucy, how could you not? The title is perfect, because pity is one thing Mrs. Lovett definitely lacks in. Great work and very well-written!
| Eph chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
That was amazingly wonderful, well-written and satisfying, and it makes me wondrously happy. XD
| little miss artemis chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Mrs. Lovett really is a very selfish woman. Made me feel so bad for Lucy.
| therisingharvestmoon chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
I loved it. Well done and very origional. I'm watching Underworld, so it took a very well written piece to get me distracted.
| roberre chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Quite an amazing story, I must say. "
I love how Mrs. Lovett views Lucy in such a condescending light, and how she's determined to prove even to herself that she's better for back story of how Lovett got the razors is fantastic, also.
| pinkeop chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
This was very nice! I enjoyed reading it a lot. Sometimes people who write Mrs. Lovett forget that she is an independent woman and probably wouldn't take much pity on Lucy when she had her own life to live. Good job. Well written. ]
| Angel of Music lover chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Wow, this was really, really great. :) I think that you captured Mrs. Lovett perfectly with her irritation towards Lucy and her lasting affection toward Benjamin.
Really good job!