Reviews for HATE
miyako.saku chapter 8 . 10/31/2010
i really liked it!

about how to continue...


the first or the second its good to me !
penguindan333 chapter 8 . 5/5/2009
Can you please update this. It is very intresting and im sucked in.
yAkArI-TaKaRi lUvEr chapter 8 . 5/10/2008
update please! thank u
Guest chapter 8 . 5/4/2008
Fine story, only you could use a bit of time spacing and TK convincing Kari who he really is. The A/N are really helpful, but it would be better if they wouldn't be needed.

Good luck and update soon!
Blonde-Eko chapter 8 . 4/26/2008
Aw friends again.

i think you should go for the steven idea, give takeru some competition lol.

but the smooth sailing fic would also be good (especially if its sweeter ])

i do really like this fic, especially now they're mates again.

tai was funny too, good one!
Smoochynose chapter 8 . 4/26/2008
The radio thing is a Tamaroid system or something mawhosits. XD

Takari ending please!
esgue19 chapter 7 . 4/25/2008
such nice story!

i'm a fan of takari pairing.

hope you'll make more fanfics with this pairing.

i'm looking forward to your new fanfic!


Knight Zeromaru chapter 7 . 4/22/2008
Poor Takeru has to deal with so many things...

Great Chapter, keep it up
Jack chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
some of your mistakes are in the dialogue. for example "Thank Takeru," She said and suddenly she hugged him shocking the blonde. You're supposed to put a comma not a period after Takeru. If it's a question or exclamation you do not need a comma.
Smoochynose chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
Ha! She fell off the chair. My oh my what are we going to do with that one?
Lord Pata chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
I don't think it was quite easily, I mean it passed a long time since the last time they talked, besides not matter how angry Kari was at him, she missed him a lot
holyangelofhope chapter 7 . 4/21/2008
me no loggy

awesome chapter..

keep it up
Blonde-Eko chapter 4 . 4/21/2008
Aww this chapters great, i like how davis comes to save the day by tellin tk about him and hikari ]
Blonde-Eko chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Aw takeru... hikari... [ Interestin fic, but do ya really think takeru would be that influenced by peer pressure? i suppose growin up might change priorities n all but still. glad he's comin back on track tho, cant wait see how apology goes... lol. i like it even if it is a bit unlike tk.
Knight Zeromaru chapter 6 . 4/20/2008
that must be a drag, having to choose between two the way the detention part is not to harsh...I got suspended for being late once...good chapter though
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