Reviews for HATE
Jack chapter 6 . 4/18/2008
i think you need to work on your English, because some of the dialogue is kind of wrong.
puasluoma chapter 6 . 4/17/2008
wow! I love this story! please update soon!
Smoochynose chapter 6 . 4/17/2008
What an awkward situation to be in! Poor old Kari.
Lord Pata chapter 6 . 4/17/2008
I hope she picks Takeru, they need to solve this mess once for all
Knight Zeromaru chapter 4 . 4/6/2008
Wow The King of the Nerds sounds like a true red neck asshole...I think he's just hating on your fic

-I mean one of your earlyer reviews down below-
Knight Zeromaru chapter 5 . 4/6/2008
well the story seems good. I just hope you updated soon
Nate-Mihael chapter 5 . 3/28/2008
Nice! He probably knows she lying eh?
Lord Pata chapter 5 . 3/28/2008
Hikari really thinks she can fool Takeru? she has to be kidding xD

Takeru can read her like a book for all we know

Is really good I can't wait for the next chapter to see what Takeru will say :)
puasluoma chapter 5 . 3/28/2008
update asap! lol pls!
NonMetallicMetal chapter 4 . 3/24/2008
Hi. It's me. the 'er...someone.' I still don't think you understand what I was trying to explain. But, no I'm not nagging you on how you're supposed to do something. Remember, how you write is up to you. You told me that you just recently started writing correct? Well, it's always good to experiment, so don't be afraid to do that once in a while.

As for the story. It's going very nicely. It's kind of fun to see TK put in the position of 'player,' and even more so when I remeber him crying from the first season of digimon...they grow so fast...
yAkArI-TaKaRi lUvEr chapter 4 . 3/23/2008
puasluoma chapter 4 . 3/21/2008
aw wow! please update asap!
Smoochynose chapter 4 . 3/21/2008
Yay Takariness! Can't wait until the next chapter
Oreo-chan93 chapter 4 . 3/21/2008
aww she liked him...i meen loved him

davis seemed nice here

keep it up im all ears ..or atleast eyes to read
puasluoma chapter 3 . 3/18/2008
aw omg update asap! please please please! that was... wow
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