Reviews for Please
Sweetheart From Hell chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Really good story!
amyblair chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
bum a fag? In America, that takes on a whole new expectation!

Love the stiletto in the front apron pocket.

I adore how she couldn't say no, knowing it was going to change her life back to where she was that she hated so much.

Great, great character. I'm interested if you did write another story with her in it. Guess I'll have to find out on my own.
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
No, actually, that makes sense. I mean, from whawt we've seen of him...it fits him. Of course, now I have the song "Frankie and Johnny" goin through my head, lol. Great job. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
cozmikfaerie chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
this was a good start, I agree with you that John is a totally different person with outsiders than with his sons...we all tend to stand naked to our own families, it is okay with them, where it wouldn't be with a stranger! I like Frankie, I hope we can learn more about her, she seems like she will be a very interesting character!
chaospayne chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
I really liked this. I also tend to see John the way you do. There would be no way he could have lasted as long as he did if he couldn't read people.