|Reviews for Elusive Awakenings|
| Guest chapter 31 . 10/12/2013
You have to finish this story! It's awesome! please finish it? :)
| Guest chapter 31 . 7/28/2013
That was a really good story but why didn't you finish it? I thoroughly enjoyed it but it isn't finished!
| Kaya chapter 31 . 7/8/2013
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/2/2013
happy camper wtf. where did that come from.
and i liked this chapter alot.
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 31 . 6/1/2013
He obviously didn't use a spell to get dressed. Or use a towel for that matter.
Maybe in his dreams. Or as it stood now, hers.
Wait, where's the next button?
NOOOOO! Y U NO CONTINUE?! D':
I'm so friggin' upset right now.
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 30 . 6/1/2013
Ron's outburst could've gone either way. I've read a lot of stories where Ron's reaction is far-fetched, overly-dramatic, or very whiny to the point where I question just how old he is supposed to be in the story. But yours is the first I've read that sounds utterly plausible.
I applaud you!
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 28 . 5/31/2013
I'm so in love with this story. You don't even know .
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 25 . 5/31/2013
"I thought you might be hungry," she said looking evenly at him.
Like a married couple already x3
...he had caved to peer pressure.
Story of his life!
"The whole reason that we're in this situation is because of my father. He orchestrated this whole thing and while I wish he hadn't decided to play God with our lives it's honestly... I think... I think maybe... it was the best thing that he ever did for me. I know that you hate all of this but I want you to know that I don't want to make any of this difficult and I'll try to do what I can to make you happy. I just thought that the proposal needed to come from me. So I'm asking. Will you marry me?"
My feels, MY FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLSS.
Slowly, ever so slowly, he moved closer to her, and she was sure that her heart stopped beating as she felt his arm wrap around her. Her head was resting on his shoulder and he was so close, so wonderfully, wonderfully close. He was so warm and soft and Hermione closed her eyes drinking it all in. Again she wondered how anything could possibly feel this good. Deep down she knew that it couldn't last. It wouldn't last.
Gahhhhhhhhh, my insides are melting. They're melting I tell you!
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 24 . 5/31/2013
Yuppers. Totally falling for each other.
Question remains: when will they realise?
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 23 . 5/31/2013
WHOA. Was not expecting that!
My heart was literally beating with anticipation!
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 22 . 5/31/2013
"Sorry, did you want this?" he asked with an innocent smile that was much too innocent to be real.
Haha! That smarmy little git!
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 21 . 5/30/2013
Hahaha! That little banter in the end just lightened up the whole story!
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 19 . 5/30/2013
"Sometimes I wish my father was dead."
Whoa...there's a conversation stopper.
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 18 . 5/30/2013
Hermione breathed an audible sigh of relief. The dread that she had been carrying around with her finally dissipated and she felt the heaviness lift from her chest. She wanted to hug him. All of this time she had spent worrying that he was going to make the wrong decision, that he wasn't going to be true to who he was and what he wanted had been for nothing. She had been wrong. For once in her life it felt good to be wrong.
Oh this paragraph...makes me feel so uneasy :(
This was going to be no different. Bed, heart, what did it matter?
Boy, is he in for a surprise.
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 17 . 5/30/2013
She didn't know whether to feel touched or to slap him.
You and me both...lol