Reviews for The Joys of Public Transport
Stephanie chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
I really liked your oneshot! It has so much emotion and feeling for having non of your characters speaking aloud. I wish there was more to read. Like something totally quirky and weird happens right after they get off the train... Anyways, the writing flows nice and I love the originality expressed in your piece. I look forward to reading your other work, or perhaps a continuation of this story.
HopelessRomantic chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
i want to know what happens later! after they leave the station! please! it would make an amazing story.
ExpletiveExpert chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
it was adorable, you should continue it, it would make a good story, but it also makes a good one-shot :)
the-glory-days chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
This was absoutely beautiful.
Bouncy-KK chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
this story is really good! :D i love how neither of them spoke at all, you captured there strong bond perfectly, well done
omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
aw! thats such a cute story!
ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
Oh that's so cute! I love the whole idea of meeting the perfect man on the train, and then Edward coming on with the rose - oh it was so romantic! :-)
mad-sugar-but-sweet chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE!

loved it

x

Bee
FrozenFire chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
Lovely story! Would make a great longer story...hint hint...

No truly this is very sweet and charming, a perfect blend of romance and humor. Nice job!
Jack of the North chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Wow, I love the no dialogue.

*giggles like a school girl*

It was cute, even with the total random insertion of the characters into a human situation, you still got a sense of each of the characters. lol, that didnt make sense did it? You know what I mean, you could still see personality traits that make them them.
un aveugle chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
that was one of the most beautiful things i've read.

it was so perfect.
anonymous chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
aw so cute! :) u should write a sequel longer for sure :) lol
ButterfliesxAndxHurricanes chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
OH MY GOD! i read this story ages ago and i have been trying to find it so i could add it to my favourite stories list! i have seriously been searching since about April this year and i have finally found it. Oh how i wish i was bella :) :)

This story is to die for...
I wanna buy a life please chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
I love this! I wish it wasn't a one shot though...
Dark-Wiccan-Goddess chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Awe that was nice, cute
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