Reviews for Sparkling Angel
autumnsimril chapter 27 . 2/5/2017
I am so glad I did not know this was an OC/Bella when I decided to read or I probably would not have but I loved it. Absolutely fantastic story.
jk chapter 25 . 10/21/2016
I didn't understand how Edward could leave his MATE and fuck Nicki...and I don't get why Nicki stuck around when she wasn't wanted...and I don't fucking get why Edward would allow Nicki to stay when he was tryinbhg to get Bella back and Nicki's presence was hurting Bella...doesn't make much sense
Ashmerlin chapter 27 . 9/5/2016
Loved the story and especially loved Christopher.

jk chapter 1 . 8/13/2016
I thought you were gonna change the convo so he was meaner?

all he said was I don't love you and you bore me...? really you couldn't do any better then that?
Laaaurennn chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
I'm listening to the song I Dont Love You by My Chemical Romance XD XP
corteznutterz1 chapter 14 . 12/31/2015
Omg! He slept with nikki! Grrrrrrrr
I feel so sorry for bella
sami1010220 chapter 27 . 11/21/2015
Good job!
jk chapter 20 . 3/10/2015
That's how your gonna get bella back with whoreward?
give chris his lady back and have bella become friends with the pathetic skank that is nikki..
ya, hatin this story now

I want bella with chris cause what asswards done and continues to do (having nikki around him all the time, what the fuck is that bitch doing there anyway?) waiting for scraps...pathetic bitch
jk chapter 17 . 3/10/2015
how could she kiss Edward? fuck Edward
seriously Edward needs to go the fuck away...nikki can have his non virgin ass
jk chapter 16 . 3/10/2015
that's it? chris and bella just fall asleep? im pretty sure bella needs to sleep with him! just to evn things up!
jk chapter 15 . 3/10/2015
I hope you don't have nikki talk to her and that's how she gets back with Edward...that would soo piss me off

Edward lies to her
leaves her
starts staying with another girl 2 weeks later
2 months later he gives nikki his virginity
stays with nikki for 7 months
brings nikki back to forks
has nikki enroll in bellas school

im seeing all these things put together as absolutely fucking unforgivable
he waited over 100 years to have sex...he fell n love but breaks her heart and gives his virgnit to someone else...cant forgive him...fuck that
I want bella and chris together
jk chapter 14 . 3/10/2015
omg OMG He did fuck nikki

what the fuck? bella should fuck chris...its not fair! Edward had a girl for the whole 7 months! ASSHOLE
jk chapter 13 . 3/10/2015
ummmm fuck that...chris is more then enough for bella...Edward can go fuck himself
bella should leave with chris! surely bellas graduated by now she can leave with him...when she fully matures he can change her and they can mate! its perfect!
jk chapter 11 . 3/10/2015
so let me get this straight...Edward leaves bella, breaks her heart...and he gets to meet,live with,and fuck a girl, I assume their fucking since hes ya know...lowering the defences around his heart...sneers lol assward
but bella doesn't get to get it on with a guy?
that doesn't seem fair does it?
I think chris should turn bella...they should mate...and Edward can be a douche bag without bella for all eternity
kantorkan chapter 6 . 6/18/2014
The hypocrite has another women that i gather he really doesn't love bet she looks like Bella .
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