|Reviews for The Demon in the Hyuga Clan|
| kirbmaster1990 chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
Alright Hinata's first C-Rank mission I wonder if anything will happen?
| Valdimarian chapter 39 . 8/16/2010
Whaaat! Noooo, I loved this story, I found the switch between Hinata and Naruto's places an interesting twist on the story!
Admittedly, I wouldn't have done some of the things you would have (mainly giving Hinata Nagato's eyes), but I've been enjoying reading it none the less.
Don't let idiots dictate how you write, you obviously have the plot outlined, and if they don't like how you're taking it, then can just stop reading it!
| Bluesv20 chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
That was a really really good ending.
Stupid people with their stupid complaints.
If you don't like it then stop reading!
God. I'm sad about you having to stop but I'm very glad that you put up the plot outline and ending.
I wish you well in all of your endeavors.
| kirbmaster1990 chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Alright this is great if this story is similar to the story Team Eight by S'Tar'Kan then I know this is going to be a amazing story! So far it is really good and it is quite well done!
| Necrovore chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
Sorry to read that the complaints where that bad, thanks for giving the plot outline at least.
| Janneia chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
*is sad* Because it read like a really good plot; didn't quite like the ending, but meh. And just a tad sad you're not going to finish the story as planned but nevertheless, a good read. :D Look forward to reading more of your work!
| Akaiko Y chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
Aww, I'm going to miss this story as it was my favorite of the "Hinata has a tailed-beast" variety. Thanks for at least providing an outline for the rest of it. I appreciate it.
| brown phantom chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
What a depressing ending.
| D3athrav3n92 chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
That's really sad. It was really good, and I was looking for to the next chapter. Just because people whine or complain doesn't mean you have to change everything just to satisfy them. And I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but you're going to have a LOT more complaints about this than probably everything else.
Too bad you didn't have the motivation to finish it, but hey, it's your life. You don't have to be tied down to this, you know.
Well, if you come up with something new, I'll read it.
| EaterOfPocky chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
Thank you for posting this. 3
| marin93 chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
LOVE .. ur story though the ending was sometines the best stories have that kind of ending
Good luck with wutever u do
| Mealstorm chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
Oh man that's sad news to me.
This story was one of the best I've ever seen and one of very few ongoing stories worth reading. I wish you best.
| Flameraven1 chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
Sucks that you have desided to let this go, but if you've lost your will to write then its best for it to end. I've loved this story for quite sometime as have always looked forwaord to new updates so this is rather sad.
The ending, as it stands here isn't a happy one, Hinata seems to loose everything in the end, even herself. Though I can see why she would leve I've always though of her as stronger then that.
Good luck in anything you plan to do, if at anytime down the road you deside to pick this story up again know that you will at lest have one reader even if its a few years down the road.
Thank you for sharing this idea with us.
| Omega the darkness chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
Why the hell did you let the haters win?
Did you really plan on making this story's ending so sad or did you just want us nice fans to suffer a bit?
| Raganark chapter 39 . 8/15/2010
well with that ending guess its for the best that you quit this because it seems all of Hinata's struggles were for nothing really
in the end she could not even have a life with the one she loved