Reviews for Foundations of Hope
james flax chapter 3 . 7/18
dear Star Wars Expanded Universe fans dont give up please dont give up the eu stories dont give up please make you own eu stories and eu fan comics or make your own sw eu comics or make eu and disney canon stories or fan comics
james flax chapter 70 . 6/19
can you make storys beween foh where they found the star dearoyer with zombies or planet with zombie
maracollins chapter 70 . 5/27
This is such a beautiful story! Thank you for writing such a masterpiece!
maracollins chapter 1 . 5/26
This story is amazing! Such a fabulous concept.
SiriuslyPink chapter 29 . 3/8
Everytime someone screams noooo in this story I just have to roll my eyes.
SiriuslyPink chapter 24 . 3/8
Omg stop it with the 'nooooo'
SiriuslyPink chapter 5 . 3/8
I'd probably feel the same way as Ben in this situation. But I'd probably bitterly deny the request to train and keep the rest to myself. He's acting like a child, not a 30 year old man.
pinky chapter 18 . 1/4
You are being very mean to the Jedi why do you hate them they are really nice people.
Millie 1985 chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
OK I have a confession to make, this is my 5th attempt at reading this awesome story. I love reading it but I have never made it to the end, whenever I start to really get into it something in the real world always seems to disrupt me and I lose track of where I am and what has happened so far. On most stories I could quickly recap and remind myself of what I have already read but not this one, it is not only really long (a fact I love by the way) but it is also very clever (another thing I love) so you need to be paying proper attention to fully understand and enjoy it. So this time I have a plan to try and ensure I finally reach the end, each year I select a book to read over my Christmas holiday but this year I am going to read your wonderful story instead. I can't wait to see what happens all the way through, if the first 15 chapters are anything to go by it will be well worth the wait.
eb93 chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
I like it!
Bradley Cude chapter 70 . 1/23/2014
I almost forgot: Another plus for this fic is that it does not neglect its non-Anidala romantic pairings:

1. Quinlan Vos/Tahl Skywalker. (Two characters rarely seen in fanon and canon.)
2. Ben Kenobi/Beru Whitesun. (An unusual pairing. Seems like you prefer giving Obi-Wan more options besides Siri, Satine, and Padme's handmaidens. Not saying there's anything wrong with those, just that I like new approaches.)
3. Darred Janren/Sola Naberrie. (Sola would have coined Anidala if she could have.)
4. And let's not forget Qui-Gon Jinn/Tahl Skywalker. (Early in the FoH timeline. Present day doesn't count.)

Again, kudos to you for not making it SOLELY an Anidala fic. (I like Anidala, I could read it all day long, but I like subplots.)
Bradley Cude chapter 70 . 1/20/2014
This is really neat.

There's only two marks against it: long paragraphs and a limited vocabulary.


You did an excellent job explaining certain aspects of this continuity. For example, Anakin built Threepio, but how did Padme come across him? Answer: Alderaanian officials bought him.

You also gave bigger roles to characters that, in canon, don't usually have the spotlight on them. A case in point is Beru, Anakin's "sister." Beru has minor cameos in Eps. 2-4. Here, she appears in a minor role. If this were a movie, Beru would be a supporting actress.

This, like Forever Destined, is a massive overhaul of the Star Wars canon. You made some very good choices in who fills what role.

Since FoH centers on events in the Original Trilogy, the swapout goes thus:

Luke- FoH Anakin Skywalker.
Leia- FoH Beru Whitesun and Padme Amidala (or is it Amidala-Organa? Hmmm.)
Han- FoH Obi-Wan Kenobi (who goes by Ben. Genius!)
Chewbacca- No replacement. (None needed.)
Lando Calrissian- FoH Gavin Darklighter.
Darth Vader- FoH Qui-Gon Jinn.
Obi-Wan Kenobi- FoH Yan Dooku.
Wedge Antilles- FoH Darred Janren.

In addition, several events in FoH have different outcomes than the same events in canon:

1. Bail and Breha survive Alderaan's destruction.
2. Yan Dooku survives his duel with Darth Vader.
3. Anakin is aware of his parentage prior to the Bespin duel. On that note, he keeps his arm.
4. Anakin's mother survives. (Then again, he was born prior to his father's fall.) On that note, kudos for noticing the relationship between Qui-Gon and Tahl.

All in all, well done.
Asyndetism chapter 2 . 12/31/2013
... why do I have the feeling that Vader is Qui Gon?
Vadersbecky chapter 70 . 11/22/2013
Epic! I've scrolled past this story but never wanted to read it. I finally did and I regret not having read it sooner. It's perfect!
Bradley Cude chapter 3 . 8/12/2013
Just out of sheer curiosity, why didn't you write the script for ANH? I like this version better.
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