|Reviews for Dark Messiah, Book one: Elements|
| Zariche chapter 18 . 8/5/2013
It's been quite a while since you posted any new chapters...it would be such a waste if you discontinue this story. I've been reading a lot of books, but I must admit that this story puts many of them to shame.
Please continue with the tale, there's nothing more exciting than seeing a new chapter ;)
| DW3321 chapter 18 . 4/7/2013
This was really good. You really should continue.
| Marri chapter 18 . 10/1/2012
Please dont tell me that you have abandoned this story,I mean I like it really a lot.
Actually this is the most interesting and a best heroes fanfic that I have read so far.
So please please write more!
| Lord Harun4o chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Still no new chapters...I'd really enjoy if you continue the great story : )
| Lord Harun4o chapter 18 . 12/29/2011
I periodically check this story for new chapters and it has been quite a while since the last one. I'd be really happy if you continue this great story and keep up the good work!
| Angry lil' elf chapter 18 . 7/31/2011
very entertaining story & pretty original if I do say so I'd like to see more this please I like how xana & leanna were at each other's throats due them both loving sareth it'd be funny if they had another argument again
| Vanbor the Fire Mage chapter 18 . 4/28/2011
i just finished replaying dark messiah and wanted to see if there were any good stories for it, imagine my surprise when i found this gem of a story great work
| Vermin-lord chapter 18 . 2/27/2011
only just descovered this story after replaying dark messiah, just reviwing to say i love it and i hope i will see more.
| Eillas chapter 17 . 7/14/2010
i forgot to add this in the review of chapter 18. Kojiokida2 your one of my favorite fanfiction authors and this story is my favorite of all the fanfictions. heres to hoping another update as this is truely an awesome Fanfiction
| Eillas chapter 18 . 7/11/2010
Well one way or another there is certianly a lie going around. Great chapter!
| Mixpicles chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I just signed up to encourage you with your writing.
Keep it up, please.
| Eillas chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
This is a good chapter, I see the relationship between Sareth and Xana is growing stronger.
| Matian chapter 16 . 6/21/2010
Not much to say but mentioning how happy I am that you've updated. Just so you know, has a new Heroes of Might and Magic section, so if you change your story's directory to there, you might garner more readers and reviews.
Good ending note to the chapter, by the way.
| Anmynous chapter 16 . 6/21/2010
Holy crap, it's an update!
Now I just need to skim the rest of the story to remind me what the hell was going on anyway.
The timeskip was a good idea, necessary to get the plot moving even. Cool to see the familiar plot items appearing. And Orcs. Can't forget the Orkz.
"It was a fairly standard farming community" looks a little weird. Maybe just cut the fairly standard.
| Eillas chapter 16 . 6/21/2010
I take it hopefully you will continue this story? :)