|Reviews for Atrox|
| Noxbait chapter 19 . 9/17
Oh. My. Gosh. I am BEGGING you to write more! Begging begging begging!? Please please please don't leave it there! This is such an incredible story and I'm dying for the next part! Please please come back and write more!
| PonyDroverHPT chapter 19 . 1/16
Hi! I'm excited to be your first reviewer of 2015. Your stories are phenomenal! Whenever you get the chance, I'd love it if you could update. You are so incredibly talented, and I wish I had a fraction of your writing prowess. I hope your RL has become more manageable, and I hope you can eventually continue writing. Have a wonderful year!
| Mistycat chapter 19 . 12/10/2014
RL sounded kinda overwhelming for you. Hope it has settled down some, not just to finish this story. I enjoy your writing.
| xLilaRosa chapter 19 . 11/4/2014
Wow! I have never read such astronomically, beautiful Sam!Whump in this fandom, ever! You are one talented lady.
I hope some day when real life calms down, you see to finishing this fic. It's way to beautiful to be left unfinished!
| LoveSamandDean chapter 19 . 6/23/2014
Are you writing anymore on this story? I really like the 2 stories.
| Dino-SOAR chapter 19 . 1/30/2014
LOVE this story! Please update!
| planB chapter 19 . 12/30/2013
Oh. My. God! It's like you never even missed a day in posting! I am So Very Happy you are back! I love, love, love your work! Thank You!
| twinchaosblade chapter 19 . 12/30/2013
Joy to the World, an update! What a surprise indeed; I'm so glad you were able to squeeze a tiny bit of writing here and there into your super-busy schedule. No need to apologize for not finding the time - I haven't even been able to properly READ fanfiction in over eight months, much less write anything - the most important part is that you didn't abandon this excellent and marvellously whumpy story for good. As long as you post a chapter every once in a while, I'll jump right back in reading the update. And funny enough, even with the time between chapters I didn't need to rehash the last chapter or so because it came right back to me, as soon as I started reading. Your incredibly strong story is certainly nothing if not memorable!
The new chapter managed to seamlessly continue its predecessor, keeping the tension and suspense up without giving the reader time to catch a breath. As always, the chapter is very well written and it is exeedingly easy to immerse oneself into the story and suffer right along with your characters. Poor Sammy, and I'm pretty sure you aren't finished putting the poor guy through the wringer; and that's not even considering the supernatural threat that is lurking in the shadows. Now what an evil cliff-hanger you left us with to ensure we are truly staying on the edge of our seats until the next update arrives.
Your characterizations are still wonderfully consistent and easy to identify with. You always put so much care into creating these characters that one can't but like them; and that doesn't only ring true for the main characters but also your original characters. In this chapter I especially loved Bobby to bits and pieces; he is so fiercely protective of his boys, and standing there, helpless to make a real difference is truly killing him. Dr. Jessup also keeps amazing me. He is such a strong and magnificent character, I can't say enough about him! Then there is Cameron, who really has come a long way since his first appearances. He has come around and become a very supportive character throughout the past few chapters. It's something I didn't expect of him at first but he has really become a likable addition.
Thank you so much again for posting a new and absolutely wonderfuly chapter! All the best for 2014 and take care!
| Madebyme chapter 19 . 12/30/2013
I can't tell you how excited I was to see another chapter of this fic! I'm thrilled that you're back and that you're determined to finish the fic.
As always, I appreciated all the medical details here and how you wove them into such a dramatic chapter. I loved seeing Bobby crack a little under the pressure too and poor Dean, watching helplessly as Sam suffered yet another set back.
I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this and to unravel just what exactly is wrong with Sam. Is it a stroke or maybe a vision? I'm on the edge of my seat.
Thanks again for sharing this chapter, it was such a treat! Take care, :)
| skag trendy chapter 19 . 12/29/2013
Great to have you back, hon. Excellent, tense chapter and I can't wait to read on... But in your own time, of course.
Wishing a very Merry Christmas and a happier new year to you and your family.
| Dawn N chapter 19 . 12/28/2013
I was so thrilled when I sat down at the computer and saw a new chapter for "Atrox" in my inbox, I clapped and said "Holy %# ! a new chapter" :-D I loved the new chapter and it was so worth the wait. A very evil cliffhanger :) but I will wait eagerly for more but with patience.
There's no need to thank me for nudges or encouragement, I was happy to provide them! But, you are so very welcome!
Excellent work and I look forward to chapter 20!
| MysteryMadchen chapter 19 . 12/28/2013
Brilliantly done and I must say i admire your tenacity. I two have two stories that are left unfinished, thanks so RL complications I just haven't had the motivation to keep writing and feel that if I do the chapters will be crap. I like your statement that although the chapter may not be as good as those previously, it was at least a new chapter and that is inspiring. Thank you for the new chapter and thank you for keeping with the story. It is brilliantly written and I can't wait to see/read more. I love limp Sam and hope that he will live with all limbs intact in the end but may have complications from his ordeal. Nothing like cognitive issues like Sam being reduced in intelligence, I hope, but physical I'm totally hoping for. Does that make me a sick sick girl? Well yes but hey that's just me. :) Thanks again and well done! Nicole. :)
| Hacked It Out and Fell chapter 19 . 12/28/2013
I had to do a double take when I saw this story show up again! It's like a late Christmas present! I'm so happy to see an update.
| ziggy.uk chapter 19 . 12/28/2013
So good to see you back with another chapter, this story is one of my all time faves and this chapter was well worth the wait. OMG have to feel for both Jessup and Sam there, Jessup trying a last ditch attempt to get Sam hydrated and poor Sam fighting for his life even more when he has to contend with an air bubble too. And you leave us with a cliffy to at the end of this chapter!
Hope you had a good Christmas and hope that 2014 is an amazing year for you and your family. Thanks so much for not giving up with this story.
| zoneofk chapter 18 . 3/29/2013
Wow, this has been one of the most riveting stories I've read in quite a while! I loved Crotalus and had to keep on reading with Atrox! I've read both stories back to back continuously and didn't even get to bed to sleep - I've stayed up all night just reading these :-) so I really, really hope that you have maybe written up a conclusion to the story, there are still so many unresolved elements involved and I love your inclusions of the different POV of each character involved also! Very excellent work and I really hope I can convince you to finish the story?