Reviews for Never coming home
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
All of the jerks who said your story sucks need to shut the fuck up. They should've said that in a nicer way. For example: "You could improve your writing" or "This was not my type of story". You really should've put a warning, though. Oh, and did I mention those bitches need to shut the FUCK UP?!
Pensi chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
Hey, you should put warnings if there's going to be shit like suicide, even if it's a joke. I won't mention the song you're parodying because I'll admit that it is pretty damn emo, and I happen to like the band. inb4 "kil urself emo fag"
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2015
So sad. So sad.
checkmate14 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I'm pretty sure you have to warn for things like self harm and suicide. : Regardless, this fic was crap.
JPAUL chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
jordan chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
what the fuck
BigFriendlyGun9000 chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
This is what is called good writing? I have lost hope in a good 1/4 of this site due to emo stories like this. Was this written by one of the "information extractors" at Guantanamo Bay as a form of torture to be played as loud as can be to get terrorists to talk? Buddy, if that was the case, thank you for serving the country, but why release this horrifying "text based weapon (TBW) on the public? Please, think about removing it before Homeland Security gets on your case.(end sarcasm) But seriously, why is this so motherfucking emo? Oh, yeah, hes so maaaad, so depresssseddddd, so tortured by the fact that his best friend went to Japan,(not the worst case I've heard...) that his other friend is a lesbian(oh, yeah, I remember the episode where Arthur's family joined the WBC...oh wait. I don't support gays, but I don't like when people say its so fuckin terrible...God forgives all sins) and that his other is a nerd now(took him 5 years to figure that one out?) I can understand drugs and a friend of yours committing suicide, but I think you make everything too dramatic and over the top. So yes, your writing SUCKS COCK. That's it. You are a stupid emo-that's right, I said it, an EMO. It really dosent seem right when good writing is considered this stuff.
Taylor Divine chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Depressing,but emotional.
Incandy chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat. Is. This. Do not get.
cking93 chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
This sucks, it's just a crappy emo poem with Arthur characters
Neo H.B.B. Sam chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
I give this an eight out of ten Invader Iris. I think that you should have mentioned the other characters more and tell us what they became. Also, I think that Binky would be in a gang, not some stoner that passes out every night on the streets after injecting himself with some heroin and reading his child pornography. So yeah, good job, even though I found parts of this fanfiction to be rather disturbing.
lfkdlkfjfd chapter 1 . 11/2/2008

You combinbed to of my favourite things!

Self abuse/suicide stories (I know weird, but I love em) and MCR!

This was on of the greatest oneshots I've ever read!
Poopscicle chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
You are my soul mate! We have the exact same writing style. Provocative and enthralling. Good work, my friend!
Phoenyx-Scribe chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
that is an incredibly sad story, filled with much emotion. I especially liked how you used an MCR song in it. (My fave band!) 5/5 stars for this story:D Keep writing.