|Reviews for Not until I fix my heart|
| Carlie.Speranza chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
*o* ' "Promise me something," Kari said when they broke apart.
"Promise me that relationships with friends work."
"I promise you that relationships with best friends work and they last forever." '
I LOVE IT !
| OnlineWarrior094 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
you cant kill off TK, well, considering my story i guess i cant really talk but... i liked the ending. keep up the good work.
| Khajmer chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Hey, breaking up overly sappy endings by killing someone off is my thing! Don't even go there.
Anyways, you're right, it is a little too sappy of an ending, but all in all it's a nice one-shot, particularly if it was your first.
| padfoot's prose chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
a smile that stopped the rain from falling... and then an unusually big hailstone came down and hit TK on the head, killing him immediately.
Yeah, that ending would've been MUCH better!
lol, well done, even if it was sappy.
| Echo In The Night chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
| Oreo-chan93 chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
i luv it