|Reviews for To Dance With the Clouds Which Follow a Storm|
| nikikins chapter 4 . 3/16/2014
I know that it has literally years since this was written, but I wanted to express my appreciation for your story. I go from beginning to end reading SGA stories & then start over again. It amazes me when I find a really good story & author I somehow missed. But it feels like finding hidden treasure also. Thanks so much for this AU version that highlights Ronan and Mackay. Enjoyed getting to eavesdrop on Ronan's thoughts and how much Atlantis and the team mean to him. Lorne and especially Rodney being the heroes was refreshing. Really enjoyed this and your other stories I read after.
| Eszterprise chapter 4 . 8/19/2008
Wow, that was great. I know that it's AU now, but I was interest to know, what was you idea about that picture. It's amazing how you caught the real episode. You now them right. Thanks to share it!
McKay said not to panic. LOL.
| Sheppardster chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
Holy Cr*p! I only hope the episode will be as amazing as this story.. if it's not, I'm just going to keep re-reading this and pretend it is!
I'm seriously in awe of this and actually can't believe that I'd not read this fic before now... where on earth have I been?
Absolutely adored it :)
| starg8fans chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Thank you for this, I really enjoyed it. The characters were so lifelike, and you had lots of great interaction going. I liked it especially since it doesn't look as if we will get any Shep or Ronon whump at the beginning of S5, so your story was a real perk.
| Delka chapter 4 . 5/21/2008
Works for me. And you were right about the spoiler parts-from the little I've seen.
| Astraldust chapter 4 . 4/19/2008
Great read and I hope S & R turns out like this. Thanks for writing it.
| GaterGina71 chapter 4 . 4/2/2008
I really liked this story. You captured Ronan very well. I would love to see a story about McKay delivering Teyla's baby though. That would be an interesting scene.
| jlover chapter 3 . 3/30/2008
Terrific. What I wouldn't give to see that play out on screen. I love Sheppard whumping and the angst of it all would be amazing to see.
Wonderful story. Thank you very much for the visual. I could see it unfolding and felt every pang of emotion as well.
| donttouch chapter 4 . 3/29/2008
I'm happy everything worked out. Ouch though...
| donttouch chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
Poor Sheppy, poor Ronon, poor everyone :( You are making me wanna read more...
| donttouch chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
| donttouch chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
dun dun dun
| TheNaggingCube chapter 4 . 3/17/2008
I hope we get this! Really really good story. Very believable and wonderful. I think you captured Ronon just fine. McKay was spectacular in just those few words and moments.
| Lucilla2 chapter 4 . 3/17/2008
Well done! Great follow-up to 'Last Man'. I love Shep-whump, and Sheppard & Ronon friendship fics, so this was perfect!
That production sketch of whumped Shep raises some wonderful story possibilities, which you've certainly delivered on! I loved how Ronon takes care of Shep, and how real everyone's reaction was when Shep couldn't move his legs.
| Snow'sLuckyCat chapter 4 . 3/17/2008
Superb fic, coolbreeze! i love the way that this ep played out in your capable hands! bravo! especially luv the cute ending. cuz john and babies are made of pure and total WIN! ;) *claps heartily* *adds this to fave lists promptly* *huggles you mightily for this posting of your awesomesauceness that includes great and realistic characteriztions, great whump, great angst, and interesting looks into ronon's skull and the friendship that exists between he and yeh shepster too* YAY! :)