|Reviews for The Immortal|
| the mighty lu bu chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I told you I would get to this. That is why I put it on my favorites list, so I could remember.
Of course Xena was on the voyager, the warrior princess will never die, not so long as she has something to do.
Excellent chapter. This really does spark my interest. I'm going to share the link to this story to a freind of mine who also writes here. She likes Xena and Startrek, so of course she has good prioties,
| Lauramichca chapter 7 . 8/23/2010
Darn it! tis thing is so screwed up but fun, that I couldn't stop reading it. And now I have to be up in less than an hour! Hope you get back to it some day.
| Kingdark chapter 3 . 12/3/2009
The only complaint I have is that the story is emotionless. Characters just say stuff without emotion. You don't mention if they are angry, said or just plain pissed off. You should remember that in the future, because it is a turn off.
| hankbernathmsn.com chapter 2 . 7/17/2009
Commander Chakotay you’re need on deck five,” Tuvok told him over the intercom.
you may have a need to be somewhere, but you are needed on deck five. try that
| alexceasar chapter 7 . 4/1/2009
Very nice job here. this last chapter was too funny. Poor ena and Hercules being separated for so long. Look forward to more.
| ameridess chapter 7 . 10/23/2008
It's about time those two got their freak on. I love the stuff under the nails bit. Great job!
| HAZMOT chapter 7 . 10/20/2008
Well it's about time that Zeus interfered and Hercules and Xena were finally able to consumate their love. However it's a hoot how they end of with furniture scrapings under their nails all the time. It seems everyone on the ship is one big family now and it fits. :D
| HAZMOT chapter 6 . 10/13/2008
This gets better and better each time I'm engrossed into this story. The crossover is excellent and I'm convinced that Ares is still after Xena. It was fun to see Katheryn want children. I never really liked the Voyager show that much, but this makes me want to go back and look at some episodes. Harry is just a pot head for telling Katheryn she reminds him of a mother type figuire. But Katheryn is getting along in years and wanting children is the first sign. I hope it works out for Harry and Katheryn, and I'm sure Xena loves playing matchmaker. Though I think she should of never told Harry, Katheryn's intentions. Now they have to worry if they will survive the Borg and make it out alive. :D
| ameridess chapter 5 . 8/21/2008
Who knew space kids could get into so much trouble? Loved the chapter. I liked the line about scaring the crew for life referring to them kissing. Hopefully they'll defeat Ares and won't have to wait too long.
| Purplehawke3 chapter 4 . 6/9/2008
I'm loving this story. I'm enjoying all the twists from the story we know and how you've expanded on it. I can't wait for the next part.
| THE ABSOLUTE FILTH chapter 4 . 5/22/2008
This is horrible! It's craptastic! It's worse beyond the worst! It should be eaten by Great Cthuhlu (a TRUE God) and then raped by Azathoth himself (a being ABOVE Gods) and then dumped into an spacetime cessure!
| ameridess chapter 4 . 5/4/2008
I'm so glad that Herc and Xena were able to have their children. Now they just have to save the crew. Great job!
| HAZMOT chapter 4 . 5/4/2008
Ah, yes, our little space family continues. At least now with the twins born, Ares curse is lifted, but Zeus had to know in advance that Ares would not take this sitting down. Now that Xena and Hercules have been induced into the Continium, and that they are to help mankind, what will Ares part play in this as well as Hercules and Xena's two children. Eleanor and Leonardo seem to be a little greedy for their mothers milk, and certainly now that they've slowed down on the growth spurt. I have a feeling they will be instrumental in saving mankind as well. I have a feeling that Ares set up his little trap as Q did in their loss of fuel. Now we can see what will happen once they continue their journey back to earth. :D
| HAZMOT chapter 3 . 4/6/2008
Well it seems that Xena has finally trusted more of the crew to actually give them a detailed explanation on why she is immortal and why she needs Hercules. It Aphrodites had anything to do with it, they will be together. It sounds like Aphrodite intervened somewhere down the road to protect Xena's children. The fact that they showed up on the ship, begins to sound like she protected them from Ares. We know Xena would give up her life to save them and this would give a new beginning to her legacy, but what of Hercules? :D
| ameridess chapter 3 . 4/4/2008
I love it! That sucks that Herc and Xena can't kiss at all. It was so cool to involve Aphrodite and to have them see their kids again. I can't wait to read more!