Reviews for Last One Out's a Rotten Egg
Aww chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
wakingfire chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Wow. I must say that this is definitely my favorite fan fiction ever. I'm extremely impressed at how you managed to convey such a powerful message, with a common setting, make that setting unique, without much dialouge, in under eight hundred words. I'm astounded! I'm completely blown away. I can only hope that someday, with practice, I may be as able as are you.

And I also loved how you took a common Zutara ENDING and sort of... wove it into something completely different. If that makes sense. Thank you for writing that, it was CERTAINLY a relief after all the cliches!
janedoe401 chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
*Claps furiously* Woot! Woot! Nice one! Loved the POV being from a third party. The ending was really nicely done.
me chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
i had to read the last line 2 times b4 i got it but when i did that was the best.

loved it
little blueness chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
mm I'm quiet curious as to how they got out...

The ending is priceless. Loved it.
onceuponachildhood chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Crap. Now it's gonna bug me...

*adding to my C2*

Dragon Jadefire chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Ooh, I like the ending. I wonder how the two escape. did they escape?
Dancing through the Storm chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
aww, that was really good, very well written, though you're not really supposed to use the word 'you' referring to the audience, but it was a really nice story :)
AvatarAiris chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
awesome one-shot _

i loved all the fighting

between Katara and Zuko

nice job :)