Reviews for Unfamiliar Spell
7jerky chapter 13 . 3/25
Sorry you got a crap review dude... but I think this a work of art. Thanks for writing all that you did.
7jerky chapter 12 . 3/25
Fantastic. I love the return of the voice who is all kinds of cranky at Hermione for not acting on her desires. I also love how the voice is so... Hermione but not. It's like unfiltered Hermione. Which I guess is the point. Anyways I love it
7jerky chapter 11 . 3/25
So was so good and so hard to read all at the same time. Wonderful challenging writing dude.
7jerky chapter 9 . 3/25
Awww... This one was somehow harder (sadder I mean) even though this story has been from Hermione's pov. I thought I'd accept it quicker... very well written
7jerky chapter 8 . 3/25
Wow. What an adorable date-non date. This is a fantastic story with such a unique premise...
7jerky chapter 7 . 3/25
I kind of had a feeling this was where it was going with the story with harry. You set it up well. Left hints in all the right places. Also. Hermione might be in a little denial right about now... cause I kind of just want to be like "dude you gay" even if it's only for ginny...
7jerky chapter 6 . 3/25
Omg this is fantastic
7jerky chapter 5 . 3/25
I love how you're writing this voice of Hermione's. Almost like its a third character advising her on her decisions... it's really really interesting. I think that we all talk to ourselves about decisions and stuff... I've just never seen it used like this in fanfic and I love it
brit9449 chapter 13 . 3/19
Alex,
Can I just say that a) Kino is a jerk and b) that you should totally update I wanna know what happens! I'm very intrigued! Once again Kino is a jerk and he should go die in a hole cause he has no right to be so judgemental!
Sincerely,
brit9449
BiBenji chapter 13 . 1/27
Alright so I basically never review a story that's been left for over a yr without a review but I wanted to spread some love and constructive criticism with a fellow author. I really like how you were doing this story and how you've developed the main ladies. I think if you rewrote the first chapter or 2, it would fit with the quality of your later chapters better as your writing became better. That's really my only advice. Well, and actually finish this story but after 4 yrs I won't hold my breath. Anyway, just wanted to let you know your writing was appreciated!

Xox B
thescolar chapter 13 . 11/9/2016
super story hope you do write us some more... please... and soon... please
Ginmione chapter 13 . 9/12/2016
So your work is amazing i just wondering if are you going to continue writing
Guest chapter 13 . 3/2/2016
I hope you haven't quit the story bcuz of "kino" considering that the last update was in FUCKING 2012 I'm assuming you have. How dare you. I love this story.
Guest chapter 13 . 10/15/2015
Such a shame, excellent fic. Please come back!
Lee chapter 13 . 10/7/2015
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!

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