Reviews for Kokoro
ElricLawliet chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
That was good! I could feel the emotions, so sad...TT Who died, though? I can't figure it out...

Daytime Stars chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Aww! That was cute! Was it Komui that died? That's the only person I can think of...

and I asume that 'Aiishiteru' means 'I love you?' I have no knowledge of Japanese so if I got it wrong forgive me...

Anyway it was good! Have a cookie! *tosses joo teh cookie*

Yay for couplings!

addenza chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
? Who died? XD Like your story, anyway.
Noah Gabriel chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Well... Apart from the large bunch of type near the end, very good. *holds up invitation* We invite you to the AllenxLenalee forums.
IOTR chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
In some parts, bad grammar.

And who died?

I'm confused.

Partly corny and mushy.

I'm more of an angsty person.

But good job! -sarcastically puts up thumb-

No, seriously, keep up the good work, Toni.

AllenxLenalee FOREVER

How 'bout I dedicate another story to you? :P

~Tiffany the great.