Reviews for Searing Betrayal: The last of the Vizard
Devilsummoner666 chapter 3 . 8/7
Please finish this! To many yoruichi fics are, just lemons. Also, -san is used if you're just meeting someone, formal events, stuff like that. It's basically Mr and Mrs/Ms. And -kun is used for males when they're really close. Parents, siblings, friends, it's also used as a term of endearment when dating or if they like the boy. Not criticizing, just letting you know
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 3 . 11/18/2014
Lex chapter 2 . 3/18/2014
Sokyoku - Big. Fucking. Zanpakuto. Used as a form of execution against capital offenders amongst the shinigami. As far as I can tell, it completely obliterates them.- so like a grenade but less bloody and more stabby spear bird blade ?
Muahahahahahahahahahahahahahah chapter 3 . 1/2/2014
mugetsu95 chapter 3 . 11/23/2013
when tha heck will ya update
Guest chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
More plz
Xuan Tian Shang Ti chapter 3 . 6/15/2013
San- A Japanese honorific suffix used to denote a respectful term (i.e. Mr, Mrs, Ms, Miss etc.)
Chan- Japanese honorific suffix used for a partner (female) with great affection, used for pets or used for younger childeren in a non pedo sense.
Kun- JHS used for younger boys (i.e. 30 year old talking to 15 year old etc), used for partner (male) in the same way that -chan is used.

Reference: Half Japanese, learning Japanese for years.
TheViewer chapter 3 . 3/8/2013
Update please
Guest chapter 3 . 12/16/2012
The Encroachment (Plus-Hollow) takes 36 hours only because of special gas Urahara put in the pit used in Shattered shaft training,otherwise it can take several years.
Lu Bane Na chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
Why? Why hasn't this been updated in forever!? There aren't enough Ichi/Yoru fics out there.
Vylarr chapter 3 . 6/30/2012
Realyy enjoyed it so far, shame it's been 4 years since any updates...
Wanderer999 chapter 3 . 5/3/2012
Really enjoyed... so very much looking forward to any updates
rescue 007 chapter 3 . 1/24/2012
I love how at the top you say this story will in no way ever be canceled ... It's been 4 years cince you've updated it... Makes you either a liar or a retard...
crypto496 chapter 3 . 11/11/2011
Okay this chapter was good however towards the end you messed up. Ichigo lost his soul reaper powers when he first fought against Renji and Captain Byakuya. When Urahara threw Ichigo down "The Shattered Shaft" after cutting his soul-chain, it was to help him use his own shinigami powers since he lost Rukia's. He was given 72 hours roughly before he would turn into a hollow should he not regain the powers of a soulreaper. Later to gain control of his inner hollow he went to the Vizards to learn to suppress his inner hollow.

I just wanted to clarify that.
crypto496 chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Awesome. I'm loving how this story is going so far. Thanks for putting the glossary at the bottom of story...kinda helped refresh my mind.
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