Reviews for Wanting the Unattainable
Simply Emma chapter 2 . 3/19/2008
i like the idea. update really soon please.
truehazel chapter 2 . 3/19/2008
aww. Eddy-Poo. (singsong) Somebody likes Bela. lol. lovely.
I like men with no men boobs chapter 2 . 3/19/2008
good story, i'm interested in reading what am happen next, update more soon.
Gr33nJ3w3lRain chapter 2 . 3/19/2008
very intersting, im liking where the story line is going...D
Nathali chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Good plot, but you keep switching the tenses. Try and stick to one.
punkproud chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
i really like it

write soon
xlynnx chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Seems interesting!
Vampsweetheart chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Please update soon
WaitingToBeDazzled chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Please continue! I just loved it!
Dark Shining Light chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
UPdate ASAP!
unicorn1293 chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
This is a good start! But...I can already see it now, which is not a good thing, therefore you must throw in a twist that will make this story different from the rest!
truehazel chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
i like. it sounds interesting. kind of a Sixteen Candles thing goin on. popular is beloved by invisible girl. and he isn't really a jerk, just doesn't see her. hm...i can't wait to see what happens next!
Get Bent chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
omg this story has go to keep on goin it made me squeal like a little year old!
footballgirl535 chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
woohoo! i really like this idea...except the third person thing. i'm not too fond of that. but as some other person who reviewed said, this is definitely one of the better bella being a nobody stories ive read. ) yay!
Vampiratelvr chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
This is one of the better Bella's a nobody stories. It captures the reality of being a nobody...I would know...and has a great style. I like the little bit we've seen of Edward so far. Well done. I can't wait for more! Love, Jojo
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