|Reviews for Journeying Onward|
| shadowfan999 chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
please update this fic with a new chapter i cant wait to read what happens next
| Taeniaea chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
| unusualRenegade chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
Dam you cliffies -.-
great writing though!
keep up the good work
| Beserkians fury chapter 2 . 10/27/2008
Fairly young demonling isn't he. If you want, I can send Mike, my only human muse... I think he hates me.
Mike: What the f* gave you that idea? Dipsh-mph-.
Shush. Oh, and the "developing romance' between Fenrir and Melissa is almost nonexistant,confusing me to no end. Also some of the scenes confused me, like, when did Link and Melissa meet the goddesses in the total timepine of this story? Also, (seems to be alot of these things) tell when your changing POVs, clears up even more confusion.
Mike: Damn, I think that is one of you longest reviews as of yet.
Really? Well, interesting. Anyways, good story line. Until next time... FARE THEE WELL FOOLISH HUMAN!
| ForgottenAffection chapter 2 . 4/6/2008
wow this story is pretty good so far i hope you will updatea it soon.
| Dances-With-Words1409 chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
I read some of the first story you made starring Melissa and Link and really liked it. I really hope you continue this soon. . .
*sits and stares at the screen waiting for next installment.*
*five minutes later: Where are you, installment!*