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Mikitsukami chapter 10 . 8/29/2016
I love the story, by your grammar is killing me! The phrasing is all wrong, as are the periods, exclamations, and a lot of your spelling mistakes are screwing up your senctences. Please for the love of all books PLEASE fix it. Or have a beta reader fix it. Hell I'LL fix it
Mikitsukami chapter 2 . 8/28/2016
The flow of your words is bad but the creativity of the story is amazing. Honestly if you'd just re read the whole thing and smooth out some parts, this story would be incredible!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2016
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sesshomaruandkagura . blogspot . com
StarKurama chapter 17 . 12/21/2015
that was cool and sweet. i loved it very much
silvercrescent pheonix chapter 17 . 11/16/2013
sweet but the ending could use some more pow. the end kinda disappointed me because I was waiting for a firework explosion ending. but overall the story line and all was great I loved it!
chibi313 chapter 6 . 9/8/2013
The deal was different than what I thought it would be...
chibi313 chapter 5 . 9/8/2013
Oh...well at least now I know a bit more about Hatara
chibi313 chapter 4 . 9/8/2013
Sesshomaru saves them! (Smiling)
chibi313 chapter 3 . 9/8/2013
Hahaha Jaken lost hella easily!
chibi313 chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
Um...who exactly is Hatara? She's...peculiar
chibi313 chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
So...does Hatara know who Kagome's mate will be? And if she does...how? (curious)
Giulietta Marescotti chapter 17 . 4/7/2013
Aw! That sure was something. I LOVE IT!
wolves134 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
wow cool!
estelin chapter 17 . 7/23/2012
this was excellent.
Mysterion aka YoruichiXSoiFon1 chapter 7 . 2/25/2012
the story is awesome so far but there are some words missing in a few of the chaps iv read and it makes it a little confusing at time and if u can fix that it would help big time

this is not a flame im just trying to help hope i didnt offend and if i did im sorry great story so far XD
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