Reviews for Five Days Out of a Lifetime
sidjack chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
wow. You are such a powerful writer. I am so amazed at the depth you can give a character.

Awesome

sid
ManicTater chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
It was great to see you in this universe! I adored the fic, the whole premise; as well as the characterizations. Thanks for sharing.
LadyKryptonite294 chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
That was really touching, i must say i wasn't expecting that ending and i luved it completly! It was gr8 to read about Sarah just being a mom and John enjoying those 5 days

Nice of him to thank her too hehe

Well written

Cee xx
Miguel Artadi chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
This was really nice. Thank YOU for not allowing us to forget that the seemingly "trivial" moments of our lives are oftentimes the most cherished )
Deluded Visions chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Aw he just wanted his mom.

Loved this fic, you humanised both characters. Cameron may be the only 'robot' but both Sarah & John, it seems like they are robots themselves sometimes.

I can totally understand John's POV. I mean he knows he's going to save the world but for now, he just wants to be an average teenager. Poor guy, no real childhood with this big burden on his shoulders. I feel for the dude.
Lyza chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Awesome!
Svixen chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Excellent story. Please keep writing T:SCC!
Expendable-Mongrel chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Aw, great fic. Makes a change to the usual ones.
Chris St Thomas chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
this sounds like it was written by someone who knows something about taking care of a sick kid. cheers to you.

also i like the way you brought the circle of thank yous around to completion and the explanation about future john feeling like the world stopped. the comment about the memories your children take with them also resonates

nicely done
charmed1of2 chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
FINALLY SOMEONE WHO WROTE A SICK JOHN STORY. IT WAS VERY GOOD. I LIKE TO SEE SARAH ACT LIKE A CONCERNED MOM,WE'VE SEEN IT ON THE SHOW BUT ALL THE FICS SEEM TO BE LOVE STORIES W JOHN AND CAM. WOULD LOVE TO SEE MORE HURT OR SICK JOHN STORIES, MAYBE WHERE JOHN NEEDS MEDICAL ATTENTION AND ONLY CHARLIE CAN HELP

CHARMED
Xeal II chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Excellent work. I was most impressed with the last bit. Sometimes when watching the show you can almost forget about the future, and the future-John. This story shows us that though he is far in the future, he remembers this time quite clearly.

It is very effective in conveying Sarah's tinge of regret at the strange life she has bequeathed upon her son. Sarah must wonder what a normal life would have been like for them, and in a sense, she has her answer, and John too, if only for five days...

Impressive job.
Nvrmore chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Oh I like the ending of that. Well, the whole thing was good, but I really liked the ending. Nice set up. Nice delivery. Nicely done.

Kudos.