Reviews for Broken Promises
bonnieofthedolphins chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
This is amazing, I adore the rapport that Felix and Weevil have its so brotherly and it reflects the small and beautiful pieces of that friendship we see on the show and I'm about two years too late to review but i think you should know that
Evilevergreen chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
I like this a lot. It was well written and a joy to read. My favorite part was with Gabe, but the fight, though his words were harsh, doesn't really make sense for Weevil to stop loving his son.

If I had written it, if fact, I thought it was the way you were going to go, I would have had Veronica get hit by car and died when she went to walk the dog.

I could see Weevil, blaming his son. How if it hadn't been for him, she wouldn't have had a reason to leave the house. And though he tried to fight it, the love for his son slowly diminished until it was no longer there.
nonhalema chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Although a bit sad, it is very good writing
crono chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
friggin awesome! you should definitely write some more WeeVer!