|Reviews for The Greatest Trial|
| aboulhosncc chapter 5 . 4/5/2008
There are major flaws and plot holes in this story for sure. First of all this whole story sems to revolve around all 3 wizards being bested by pettigrew.
For one thing why was he even there in hogwarts. Another thing why wouldn't tonks a auror and bill a curse breaker be able to do that.
Secondly the part where he was executed makes no sense if he was spotting like a crazy person then how would his memories be intact for the penesive to work.
Also if the guards believed him then why didn't they say something before he was executed.
Also the suppsosed retrial was the biggest bunch of crap ive ever seen all the questions was stuff that had no impact on the trial at all.
You forget that using the killing curse is a life sentence to azkaban if your caught and he killed somone with it even if it was an accident it still counts so you just proved him guilty not innocent.
Seriously try reading this story from an impartial view and see if it makes sense Maybe you could instead just delete this story and just have after harry is executed the penesieve memory being shown to the minster. The way it is now it makes no sense why the minister would think harry was innocent
| enderswiggin chapter 5 . 4/3/2008
Wow! A truly unique story.
While you have left a lot of questions unanswered, I can't find any fault with ending the story here. I'd love to see the sequel, but I agree with you that this fic can stand alone by itself quite well.
| I'm out of here. Cya chapter 4 . 4/2/2008
Great story... can't wait for the sequel...
| SiLvErMaSk20 chapter 5 . 3/30/2008
will you tell me when you will start writing the sequel. i really need to know what will happen next...
| ravensfan52 chapter 4 . 3/30/2008
that story was brilliant! You should add a chapter with reactions from the people in the court room along with answers to the questions that you added in your authors note. gret job
| dexterZ chapter 5 . 3/28/2008
hope u write the sequel soon...
| Tronishere chapter 4 . 3/27/2008
Another review thought. I can see people turning against Harry in a heartbeat. However, I would like to think that Ginny would have at least tried to get an answer for what happened. I know you explained it and one of her brothers was a victim, I guess it's just my hopes for a happy HPGW ending. I would like to think that Hermione would have too. She was always such a good friend to Harry - even during the really bad times.
It's the action and the HPGW goodness that makes your other stories so great to read! Again, thanks for sharing.
| Tronishere chapter 5 . 3/27/2008
Wow. I'm a big fan of your stories, but I must say I prefer the others to this one. Don't get me wrong, this story is well-written and it flows well. I just prefer the others.
I suspect that Wormtail came back to finish off the girls or Snape did it since this is AU (you can make him as bad as you like). If Snape didn't, one of the students saw a chance to finish off Harry for good.
I'm not sure what the Balance is, but I would guess it's something like "What goes around, comes around." The wizarding world will get what it deserves - they have given the kiss to the only person who could defeat Voldemort.
I'm thinking Luna is the girl Percy has in mind. If you remember OotP, Luna believed Harry. She believes lots of other things, but she believed Harry and didn't care who knew about it.
My little beliefs may be way off base, but that's okay. It is nice to have a story that makes you think.
I think you could leave things like they are and have some mystery. However, if you plan to do a sequel/prequel - that would be great too.
As always, thanks for sharing with us.
| Alice4Ever chapter 5 . 3/26/2008
that was good. and i hope that you get the sequals up soon
| maritinkerbell chapter 4 . 3/26/2008
Wow. This is one powerful story! GREAT JOB!
| lunasoliel chapter 4 . 3/26/2008
oh my freaking god...i loved it
| malko050987 chapter 5 . 3/26/2008
I have a question... I hope you'll answer it. :)
Is Harry Alan? Because there were things that hinted at it. If alan is just an OC... :/
| Cogster chapter 4 . 3/25/2008
This was actually really well done. I didn't think it would be. I loved it. I actually kind of wish there was more, but that's the mark of a good story. Kudos.
| Pooky333 chapter 4 . 3/25/2008
I really enjoyed this story, except for: I really didn't like the fact that Ginny turned against Harry. I understand your author's note explanation, but I personally believe that Ginny would have stood by Harry (at least in my mind she does!). With the exception of that one point, I really enjoyed this story. I hope that in the sequel that you are not to hard on Ginny. Keep up the great working. -Chris (Pooky)
| messhnhs chapter 4 . 3/24/2008
Only one thing to say... EXCELLENT!