Reviews for He Brings Death
NellieLovettAngelique chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
This is good! I like it :-)
AFeastFitForCrows chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Wow, I'm speachless... (In a good way)
KittyScarlet chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
hmm at the end it's a little angst or whatever, but still good.
SweeneyChick chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
wow...that was really deep and twisted. i like the fact that you have him confrojnt her n the lucy thing. it thaought that it was really good.
Lobsters forever chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Oh my! That was... I don't have words. I am so completely speechless. In a good way though. Bravo!
disguisedxlies chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Ack. Nellie. D:

This story was perfect though. Completely in character.

I loved it. :)
M. Night Wolfalona chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
How grotesque. I absolutely adored this. Never thought that it would end for her like that. But if you would write a sequel of what happens to TOby and Mr. T., I'd be very happy, as would several other people who've and who'll read this story.
Tantalize chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Great story. ) I loved the ending.
x Lost Hero x chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
whoa. nice job.
andaere chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
Woah, that was dark.


Good. IC. Well-written. Interesting.

Write more!
Crur chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
This is such a sad alternate ending... T.T Weel written though! It was very emotive.