|Reviews for I Can Do Better|
| Danger All Around chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
So far it's not so terrible but it comes from a bad fanfic community...
Man! imagine how the author must feel about that!
| Izaya-chi chapter 3 . 5/17/2011
I can't believe u chose Avril Lavigne songs, I luv u for that! she's my fav xD ;O anyways im diggin ur story...their gonna end up breaking the rules arent they? hoohoo! i can predict it i just know it!
| 21han chapter 7 . 1/21/2011
| Riki Mink chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
You put kyoko's POV, yet you use second point of view. Do you know English?
| IceDragon5683 chapter 7 . 11/26/2010
Why do you always use "you" sometimes you mean Kyoko and sometimes you mean Ren. It's getting really confusing. Besides that seems like its going well. I find it kinda funny how they notice the similarities but not that they are the same person. Keep up the good work!
| nanakira chapter 7 . 3/7/2010
Hye! Nice little story you got here. you managed preatty good to keep the real personalites of the characters on, you did a great job with this project... but you did not continue it... WHY? please come back and continue this story and a couple of others from your collection. It's a pitty to leave them like this, especially when they are this good. hope to hear from you soon. ja nee!
| Zay chapter 7 . 2/9/2010
Hey, liked ur story, intresting and unique premis! Updates when u have the time would be awesome! As an aside, Ren's last name is spelled TsuRuGa NOT TsuGuRa, u flipped the spelling alot, also the reviewer just before me commented that Ren is 21, but in ur specified time frame, he would still be 20. So I agree w/ u on that one! Cheers, and keep up the good work!
| chinny97 chapter 6 . 10/15/2009
Ren would be 21 remember
| Nehneh chapter 8 . 10/15/2009
Author's note only posting is strictly forbidden by the TOS of this forum. Therefore, it is ground for the removal of the entire story. You have been warned.
| leavesfallingup chapter 7 . 10/14/2009
I am very sorry for your loss.
There is definitely no need to apologize with what is happening in your life and in the lives of your family. Having said that, I am reading your story for the first time and I have enjoyed what you have done so far.
When you do find the time to continue I will be watching for further installments. Keep up the good work. It's great so far.
| VampsMoonAngel chapter 8 . 10/14/2009
Your story is awsomical! -Avi.
| indigoeeyes chapter 7 . 7/10/2009
UPDATE SON! Its off to a great start, and this is the first mentor type story of Skip Beat! that i have read so far. UPDATE! (:
| phxjkr88 chapter 7 . 5/10/2009
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Ashlyn Darke chapter 7 . 4/20/2009
I love it!
They're so oblivious... WHo else acts like them?
You MUST UPDATE!
| Carma-chan chapter 7 . 4/11/2009
I wish you a lot of luck in everything, really
I like your story!
so, you got all my moral support XD!