|Reviews for One Small Step|
| Shalk Zailackar chapter 10 . 11/3
Wonderful story! I look forward to reading a continuation of this interesting plot. Keep up the good work!
| Xhegu The Savage chapter 1 . 9/24
No matter how old I get, this fic always gets me in the feels. Didn't think I had any more for those blasted things.
| xxDJD22xx chapter 10 . 9/9
This, along with Ten Defining Moments, has without a doubt been THE best fanfics I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I'm not sure why I love it, but there's just something about it. In my opinion, Ten Defining Moments crushes the canon love story by a country mile, and I'm excited for when you update One Small Step. Keep up the good work!
| E.Richtofen chapter 10 . 7/29
This was such a good story, I'm so sad to see it unfinished.
| E.Richtofen chapter 6 . 7/29
I think the personality of Hinata in this chapter would be Hinata's personality if she was friends with Naruto for several years. I mean by the start of Shippuden, she was already much more confident (still stutters), but she wasn't even that close to Naruto. In my opinion, you got her personality right.
| E.Richtofen chapter 3 . 7/28
I love this story, it's just a nice read, easy to follow, and contains so many great NaruHina moments. I can't really describe what specific aspect draw me to this story, but I just really enjoy reading it.
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/29
HEY ARE U ALIVE!? COME BACK TO ME!
| K.O. Knock Out chapter 10 . 5/16
Hi. I would like to tell you that you have written a wonderful story about Naruto and Hinata in young age. I really hope to continue this amazing story or at least to put officially in hiatus. You have to update more over than 9 years and that's suddens me. I don't have found many stories about Naruto and Hinata in young age in so extensive period over "Team 8" and to be so amazing in plot too. I REALLY REALLY WISH to continue the story, because you have made a really Alternative Universe on this story and also it's standards is as good as any quality manga up there. PLEASE make the right decision and give us; the fans a really big gift again.
Farewell and i hope for the best.
K.O. (Knock Out)
| LookingSoFly chapter 10 . 4/21
You cant just put to be continued and then not continue it bro
| Icarus Uzumaki chapter 4 . 4/9
| Lex chapter 10 . 4/2
No updates for years? This makes me sad like you couldn't imagine...
| please update chapter 10 . 3/25
What!? That's it?! Why did I have to fall in love with a story that hasn't been updated in years :/
Please continue this please, its amazing :D
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/14
Please post again really soon
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/8
Where is the next part? Last I saw it has been a few years..
| DYnoJackal19 chapter 10 . 12/28/2016
will you finish this story anytime in the future?