Reviews for One Small Step
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24
pls update ToT
Oonagh 7 chapter 10 . 9/27
This is perfect, I'm really liking it, I loved how you're handling your relationship. I wonder what Mizuki sensei was up to. I hope Hinata and Naruto are on the same team. I hope for your update soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23
pleeeeaseeee continue the story, I'd really love to read chapter 9B
Guest chapter 10 . 8/8
Necesito el siguiente capítulo por favor
Ramrikai chapter 10 . 7/2
This wasn't the first fanfic I ever read, but it was the one that taught me to check the dates on incomplete fics. Even 10 years later this cliffhanger hurts. Thank you for this beautiful, if tragically short, rendition. It will live in my follow list forever.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/13
pleeeeeeeeaseeeeee come back and write the next chapter!
Guest chapter 8 . 4/24
Oh my goooood, this makes me smile so much, I love this fic
Jessica Jovel chapter 10 . 2/16
Wow, I didn't expect THIS much of a cliffhanger, and it's the last chapter, from more than 10 years ago, what a shame, anyway, the previous chapter was beautiful, the whole story. I loved it, thank you for writing this.
1awesomestar chapter 10 . 7/22/2023
It’s been 15 years, but please update
Multi fandom geekerello chapter 10 . 5/1/2023
Why has this story not been updated in 15 years? This is one of the best Naruto and Hinata fics I’ve EVER read
So so cute and awesome and portrays the butterfly effect really well
Please continue it even though it’s been YEARS ;-;
:)
Guest chapter 10 . 8/24/2022
I actually always enjoyed reading your fanfiction. Whenever I remember it. I get sad when I also remember that you quitted. Even if I try to imagine the next scenarios. It's still not as fun as reading your fiction. I wish you could return with a season 2 of this fiction and finish your 30 kisses goal. I bet everyone who read that fic probably thinks the same way. If you ever made a season 2 or continued in this fic. Please message my email:
I can't miss the chance to see more of your amazing work!
Guest chapter 10 . 8/24/2022
This fic has been one of my favorites. No. It's my top favorite. I wish you could just return and continue working on it! Though I can't wait at all.
kinokonoko chapter 4 . 6/7/2022
fluffiness aside, we really take gai character for granted. If anything he's really really a good guy everyone need in their life(aside for his quirkiness and everything he's never been a total weirdo, just too overly optimistic and tried his best to be kind not only to others but to himself as well) That speech kind of speak to me, im sorry, makes me emotional all of sudden. I thank you for including him in this chapter, and yes hinata under gai guidance is one of my favorite side story.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2022
This is great!
Omega297 XD chapter 1 . 12/13/2021
Hello there!
I just wanna thank you so much for this wonderful fanfiction... It's a tragedy that it isn't updated for over a decade... It's been one of the most well written fanfiction I have ever read. I am now following your work on this site. I seriously hope that you soon return. I sincerely wish you the best of luck, and once again, thank you.
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