Reviews for Power Lord
Omni chapter 1 . 1/3
Not trying to be picky but I wouldn't be all that surprised seeing Harry unconscious on his bed... It's called sleeping.
kittensgalor chapter 8 . 7/25/2014
All the (a/n) you put in your story really take away from the flow of the story. If you feel the need to put author notes in replace the in story notes to numbers and at the bottom of the page explain them. It really alters the flow and makes reading the story frustrating. The plot of this is good and other wise your writing is good.
Dragoomega06 chapter 12 . 12/11/2012
awsoms story!
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
i tried reading the other part that sonicboom123456 took over for you but its up anymore and the author isn't either so just letting you know so you can find out whats going on and tell everyone about it ok please and thank you
Michael Bourne chapter 5 . 3/18/2012
dude u spelled proposition wrong
darkgryffindor08 chapter 12 . 1/7/2012
great story i want to rad the sequel for this. this story is awesome keep it up!
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 12 . 11/29/2011
rosie isis and rai the kitsune chapter 6 . 5/11/2011
i agree with you about mew being a girl. my personal nickname for her is mama mew.
Ryuujin Shinkami Ashura chapter 12 . 11/20/2010
Make a sequel please :D
ewfg4r chapter 11 . 7/15/2010
vsdyfas chapter 10 . 7/15/2010
anonymous chapter 12 . 6/7/2010
Like I said before, YOUR STORY WAS AWESOME! YOU ARE AWESOME! IT WAS TOTALLY WICKED AND EVERY THING (but you do know im talking about number 11 dont you? number 12 was totally not action packed. but anyway, AWESOME!
anonymous chapter 11 . 6/7/2010
AWESOME! it was really AWESOME! dont you think so too? your storys are AWESOME! YOU ARE AWESOME!
shut up and read or go away chapter 12 . 3/27/2010
nice story. grammar and spelling could be a little better but otherwise cool. i would've liked it if harry beat voldemort like he did in the book, expelliarmus!
74 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »