Reviews for Ashes of Dusk
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
Is it strange that I like this side of Kaiba and feel that it makes perfect sense.
jj chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
ooooooooh scary kiba... i likey :)
tk04 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
this is so dirty.. hehehe what am I saying the story was great.
Mulanzu chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Wow, intense. I liked the lust in this story.
Irrelevancy chapter 1 . 11/23/2008




My imagination's running askew with images of what if's...



Can you possibly find a moment in your busy and important life and write a part where uh... WHERE KAIBA DIDN'T LET 'IM GO?


crossmyheartforever chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Hm...I really like this one. It displays Seto as a obsessive and unrestrained "antagonist". It was really interesting to read about his personality this way, it's like the outcome of numerous years of stress, quiet hardships, stoic-ness, and the crazy allure of the defiance Joey holds. Very dark and angsty. I'd say...if there was a Physcological genre, this would be a perfect fit.

I love the one-shot, very unique characterization.

Best wishes for your future writing!
Growing Pain chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Holy shit haha! Can you say "rape time"? Because I can D

Erm, I mean D Yes. Sad smiley. Phooey. Bad Kaiba, bad!

I like Dark!Seto and his obsession though. Because he is a VERY obsessive man O_o There probably are more Blue Eyes White Dragon statues than hair on his body.

I totally liked how Jounouchi DID NOT like Kaiba back. Very realistic. Kudos for that!

Daydreamer-Of-The-Unknown chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Omg Seto Kaiba is way scary

in this story i feel ever so

sorry for poor Katsuya.

Still found it interesting to

read. x Ainsel x
Rainbrat chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Dark Seto and scared Jounouchi is the best _

Poor Jounouchi / I would freak out if somebody tried to do that to me as well.

THis was beutifully written, I'm adding it to my Faves

Inamax chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
WOW! Amazing!

AS usually you portrayed the characters very good :)
Alzemu chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
It's kinda creepy and I love it! XD I love this type of eerieness. lol
The Red Lightning chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
OMG! This was awesome! I just love the way Kaiba want to dominate over Jou XD really good work :D
Azamiko chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
...I really shouldn't be happy about this. Then again, I just fully admitted to myself that one of my favorite aspects of this pairing is its darkness...XD Considering I'm a cheerful sort, it's interesting that that's what I like here.
melodyz07 chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
This is so disturbing... I really don't like Seto that way...

But anyway, it was a very good oneshot and I enjoyed reading it despite... well the way Seto is...

It would be so good if you can write a sequel. A sequel where Seto, through his sick stalcking, will begin to realize that he actually love Jou. And where Jou will begin to develop feelings for Seto and will begin dominate him (a JouxSeto fic will be so good, even if at the beginning it will be maybe SetoxJou)'

Anyway good luck for your next puppyshipping writing!
Costume Ball chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
This is impressively In Character considering the pairing. I like how Jou doesn't just give in and turn into a lovesick puppy (no pun intended) but is as scared as most people would be, facing someone like that. Really nice.
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