Reviews for Orchestrating the Silence |
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Guest chapter 16 . 8/11 This is utter peak, genuinely thank you for writing this |
Tupac's Cousin Mark chapter 16 . 8/10 I just read this and i wanted go say that it’s one of the best post-EoE stories I’ve read; maybe the best. I’m really glad that you focused on the emotional intimacy aspect of the story as to me, that’s the point of NGE. Anyone can have physical intimacy, but without the emotional aspect, it’s meaningless. Lowering your walls and letting people get close to you emotionally opens up the potential to getting hurt but also experience real happiness. Personally, I really liked the epilogue, i think it was a really nice conclusion to the story. If i had anything to criticize about the story, I’d say that i wish it was longer. I really like stories that explore Shinji and Asuka reflecting I on their behavior, what they learned in instrumentality, coming to terms with their feelings, and finally having open and honest communication with each other. Hopefully you produce some more Asuka x Shinji content in the future. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5 This fic is exactly what I needed after finishing EoE. Thank you. |
Jw07grad chapter 16 . 3/3 Ive really enjoyed reading this story. I wish it would continue so I can see what these get up to later and how them finding a house to call home with water and power would make them. It would have been nice to see them kiss sooner and more often because they are cute together now. Overall I definitely enjoyed this. |
Nihilist intellectual chapter 16 . 8/25/2023 I like this fic because Shinji here begins to stop being a idiot and confronts Asuka, recriminating her for the first time for all her abusive behavior towards him during the months they were living together. Yeah, Shinji abandoned Asuka, masturbated with her, tried to kill her and caused Third Impact, but no one can deny that the redhead was largely to blame for all of this. She abused her roommate and not even the fact that he saved her life in the volcano made her reconsider her behavior. And Asuka's antisocial behavior is not something that can be ignored, since she never acknowledged, thanked or apologized to Shinji, what's more, she blamed him for all her shit. Yeah, Asuka's right that Shinji's chronic apologies are a pathetic attempt to avoid confrontation but she can start apologizing now and admit that she's the one responsible for all the shit she's in. Shinji is not the only one who has to change, she has to admit that she pushed him away with her abrasiveness and that four courteous gestures would have saved her from all the ordeal she has suffered. |
Rabbitfaster chapter 16 . 8/21/2023 This was amazing. Such great development, the pacing was great, the exploration didnt feel forced and even the growth of the characters aside from their development together was impressively well done. congratulations on such a great work of art |
Strange Geometry chapter 1 . 6/21/2023 So perfect. Thank you. We need more. |
cellbreaker chapter 16 . 6/8/2023 that's sweet |
Guest chapter 13 . 4/27/2023 A Japanese male character, A German female character, Chapters written in Italian. The Axis just might have won, even though it took the annihilation of the entire human race except one guy and one girl. :3 |
xwcezq chapter 1 . 4/25/2023 Umm... Girls don't really have an Adam's apple tho... |
Nightnter chapter 16 . 7/30/2022 What I like most about this story is the perfect characterization of Shinji and Asuka. It is as if he is seeing an extension of the original work. Being an uncomfortable relationship, difficult, but ultimately comforting. I loved. |
Araf chapter 1 . 3/26/2022 This is god tier. |
retard chapter 16 . 2/6/2022 Fucking awesome |
Guest chapter 16 . 2/5/2022 Never mind. Asuka may have been a bitch at first but that was beautiful dude. That was not only well written but really got me feeling sad that the story of their friendship was over. Thanks man |
Cool chapter 7 . 2/3/2022 This is good but I hate how much of a cunt Asuka is. Why am I reading these fictions? I'm turning into a fucking nerd. |