Reviews for Orchestrating the Silence
Nihilist intellectual chapter 16 . 8/25
I like this fic because Shinji here begins to stop being a idiot and confronts Asuka, recriminating her for the first time for all her abusive behavior towards him during the months they were living together.
Yeah, Shinji abandoned Asuka, masturbated with her, tried to kill her and caused Third Impact, but no one can deny that the redhead was largely to blame for all of this.
She abused her roommate and not even the fact that he saved her life in the volcano made her reconsider her behavior.
And Asuka's antisocial behavior is not something that can be ignored, since she never acknowledged, thanked or apologized to Shinji, what's more, she blamed him for all her shit.
Yeah, Asuka's right that Shinji's chronic apologies are a pathetic attempt to avoid confrontation but she can start apologizing now and admit that she's the one responsible for all the shit she's in.
Shinji is not the only one who has to change, she has to admit that she pushed him away with her abrasiveness and that four courteous gestures would have saved her from all the ordeal she has suffered.
Rabbitfaster chapter 16 . 8/21
This was amazing. Such great development, the pacing was great, the exploration didnt feel forced and even the growth of the characters aside from their development together was impressively well done. congratulations on such a great work of art
Strange Geometry chapter 1 . 6/21
So perfect. Thank you. We need more.
cellbreaker chapter 16 . 6/8
that's sweet
Guest chapter 13 . 4/27
A Japanese male character, A German female character, Chapters written in Italian.

The Axis just might have won, even though it took the annihilation of the entire human race except one guy and one girl. :3
xwcezq chapter 1 . 4/25
Umm... Girls don't really have an Adam's apple tho...
Nightnter chapter 16 . 7/30/2022
What I like most about this story is the perfect characterization of Shinji and Asuka. It is as if he is seeing an extension of the original work.
Being an uncomfortable relationship, difficult, but ultimately comforting.
I loved.
Araf chapter 1 . 3/26/2022
This is god tier.
retard chapter 16 . 2/6/2022
Fucking awesome
Guest chapter 16 . 2/5/2022
Never mind. Asuka may have been a bitch at first but that was beautiful dude. That was not only well written but really got me feeling sad that the story of their friendship was over. Thanks man
Cool chapter 7 . 2/3/2022
This is good but I hate how much of a cunt Asuka is. Why am I reading these fictions? I'm turning into a fucking nerd.
BeeeTeee chapter 16 . 1/29/2022
Well, from someone who just recently finished eva and is just now jumping into the fandom, this is my favorite out of the dozen or so fics I've read so far! Truly everything I was looking for i redemption romance.
BeeeTeee chapter 15 . 1/29/2022
This is pure catharsis...
BeeeTeee chapter 9 . 1/29/2022
Fuck I just want him to say: 'Im sorry I turned you away, but I was pissed you took comfort from me without asking!'. Communicate you adorable fuckers!

I kno I'm super late to this fandom, but I am thoroughly enjoying this story.
DevilOlantern chapter 16 . 1/7/2022
loved this masterpiece
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