Reviews for Black, Gray and White
Phillies2 chapter 9 . 3/17
I am so confused on so many levels. How did Sirius get captured in the Alley? Isn't he still a fugitive and stay at Gimmuld Place? That's why Harry kept Petergrew alive you said. How did they get Gabrielle and Susan? How could Amelia not know they have Susan? Why did anyone have to sacrifice themselves in order to save either one of them, wouldn't the Horcrux in Harry die instead of somehow re-entering Voldemort? Harry also tells the Death Eaters he wouldn't kill them if they did nothing which is opposite of when he was talking to Gabby about how he was a monster who kills a lot. I mean they took Gabby and Sirius and he didn't go on a Killing Rampage? Why did it take him so long to cast the killing curse at Voldy? I feel you characters are a contradiction of themselves a little and there are some plot holes that need to be filled
Phillies2 chapter 4 . 3/17
I don't understand why he's mad, No Jurisdiction? Then why are they there in the first place? Also, they're Unspeakable's, It's not like they will go out of there way to tell everyone they killed the Death Eaters
Siri.Silverstorm chapter 16 . 12/31/2016
You can't end the story here! You gotta keep the story going! On another note, the story is really good. As I've read the story keeps getting better and better. You are extremly good at letting the readers know whats going on, and you are really good at keeping track of all of the extra scenes, like the dark lady ones and the Bellatrix ones. Great job, please keep it up
Books85 chapter 16 . 12/31/2016
The missile launcher wouldn't fit in the suit! What a line! I confess to having an abiding fondness for Dobby. He was dealt a bad hand in canon, and I really enjoy seeing him deal with the bad guys.

berend van den akker chapter 16 . 11/8/2016
Nice book, very exiting. What are you going to do with this book, is this the end or is this book going further than this?
LordofKhaos chapter 16 . 10/7/2016
Well I hope you continue this story
Guest chapter 6 . 7/14/2016
Might be just me but if they're trained as unspeakables with skills that seem comparable to a black ops military squad one might reasonably assume that they wouldn't be stuttering so much no matter the emotional situation. Other than that little pet peeve of mine I think the story is good.
Guardian134 chapter 16 . 6/9/2016
Please continue the story cant wait to read more of it...
scarlettmeadows chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
Hi :) So, I'll just start by saying that I'm very interested and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! In case you're interested in constructive criticism, I do realise that the formatting options on are limited, but try not to write long lists of characteristics and statistics that are effectively meaningless to new readers. Even if the information is important, I can almost guarantee that everyone is going to skip over I did :) If the information is very important, perhaps you could structure it in sentences? On the flip side, your summary was catchy enough that I kept reading, so good job on that!
hogwartsfan1 chapter 16 . 2/2/2016
I hope you will complete the story
elianpunz chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Great Story pls continue it please
KingRider6911 chapter 16 . 9/2/2015
The story was amazing it just sucks that you have an updated in 5 years!
Jay3x chapter 16 . 7/21/2015
ralula chapter 16 . 6/1/2015
Great story, really action packed! Well worth the time to read, thank you for your efforts.
IcySneasel chapter 16 . 5/29/2015
Ahhh such a great story and a horrible cliff hanger! I wish it wasnt dead and left here abandoned.
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