Reviews for Black, Gray and White
Guest chapter 6 . 7/14
Might be just me but if they're trained as unspeakables with skills that seem comparable to a black ops military squad one might reasonably assume that they wouldn't be stuttering so much no matter the emotional situation. Other than that little pet peeve of mine I think the story is good.
Guardian134 chapter 16 . 6/9
Please continue the story cant wait to read more of it...
scarlettmeadows chapter 1 . 5/29
Hi :) So, I'll just start by saying that I'm very interested and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! In case you're interested in constructive criticism, I do realise that the formatting options on are limited, but try not to write long lists of characteristics and statistics that are effectively meaningless to new readers. Even if the information is important, I can almost guarantee that everyone is going to skip over it...like I did :) If the information is very important, perhaps you could structure it in sentences? On the flip side, your summary was catchy enough that I kept reading, so good job on that!
hogwartsfan1 chapter 16 . 2/2
I hope you will complete the story
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elianpunz chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Great Story pls continue it please
KingRider6911 chapter 16 . 9/2/2015
The story was amazing it just sucks that you have an updated in 5 years!
yourimoll1994 chapter 16 . 7/21/2015
YOU GO DOBBY!
ralula chapter 16 . 6/1/2015
Great story, really action packed! Well worth the time to read, thank you for your efforts.
IcySneasel chapter 16 . 5/29/2015
Ahhh such a great story and a horrible cliff hanger! I wish it wasnt dead and left here abandoned.
Trey of the rebellion chapter 16 . 4/7/2015
Very interesting premise, very good execution.
whatweareafreaidof chapter 15 . 12/17/2014
You can tell this is a bashing story, What think that funny is Harry telling the head master I don't have to tell you about my life. Yes you do. Could you see a teacher telling the head master. No you can not ask about my degrees
ironhair chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Reactions of the three elders were a bit shallow...
Goldenarrow123 chapter 16 . 9/20/2014
please finish this story it is really good.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/11/2014
Well, that escalated quickly
Salunatic chapter 16 . 7/26/2014
You know, after reading this, i cant help but ask, wheres the next chapter?

Overall, i liked this fict. Really good. It shows us a very believable alternate where magic and muggle merge. Afterall, the magical world in canon is kinda backdated yes?

I do hope you update soon.

-Salunatic
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