|Reviews for Black, Gray and White|
| kyoshi711 chapter 16 . 12/28/2017
I wonder why the author quit writing this story. It was a good story.
| Carlyn858 chapter 16 . 11/20/2017
I know there is probably no hope for this story, but wow, this was amazing! I loved it, I would so want to know what happens next!
| ironhair chapter 11 . 6/17/2017
To read your story, we need to suspend all belief and I'm saying that on a fabric site!
Your story just jumps and uses unconvincing plot points.
| Cherde chapter 16 . 6/3/2017
Really enjoyed this. Unfortunately like many great stories on this site it will unlikely be finished. Ah well time to find another
| IrishNewton chapter 16 . 5/22/2017
ITs a great story any plans on continuing?
| Meepless-Kat chapter 16 . 4/4/2017
Lil gangster Dobby
That was hilarious XD
This story is so good! I can't wait till yah update next!
| Bronze chapter 7 . 3/24/2017
Well that shows Remus's been hanging around the ol' goat fucker way too long! Draco's a DE and the only good DE is a dead DE( Death Eater ). Remus should've stunned the young fool, he should've killed him. Thereby ending the Malfoy family line. And as they call themselves DEs, let them truly eat death and see if they live through it. It's not like it would've been a bad thing. The Malfoy family have a history of supporting every dark moron that come along. Their family moto should be changed to NO BRAIN, NO PAIN! They go around killing anyone and everyone that doesn't follow whoever they do while at the same time claiming to support the Pureblood cause. They never seem to realize just how many magicals they've killed or the effect it has on their magical world. They're continually narrowing the gene pool to a point where they're killing it off in England. That and they're not replacing the Pureblood lines they're killing off. Then there's the point that their leader isn't a Pureblood himself. He's not even a half blood anymore either. He's a thing. And he did it to himself.
| Bronze chapter 3 . 3/23/2017
What? Like I'm supposed to be surprised that Ron and Ginny turned on Harry?! Of course they would and did! It's only to be expected after all. Ron's a coward and Ginny's a gold digger. Now were Harry to return and be single, it's very likely that Ginny would suddenly be all over him. As for Mrs. Weasley, she's likely as not been brainwashed by the good ol' goat fucker with the extra long white beard. She's always been so far up his ass she tastes what he eats at every meal! I'm waiting to see if you do anything similar with Arthur and Charlie.
| Phillies2 chapter 9 . 3/17/2017
I am so confused on so many levels. How did Sirius get captured in the Alley? Isn't he still a fugitive and stay at Gimmuld Place? That's why Harry kept Petergrew alive you said. How did they get Gabrielle and Susan? How could Amelia not know they have Susan? Why did anyone have to sacrifice themselves in order to save either one of them, wouldn't the Horcrux in Harry die instead of somehow re-entering Voldemort? Harry also tells the Death Eaters he wouldn't kill them if they did nothing which is opposite of when he was talking to Gabby about how he was a monster who kills a lot. I mean they took Gabby and Sirius and he didn't go on a Killing Rampage? Why did it take him so long to cast the killing curse at Voldy? I feel you characters are a contradiction of themselves a little and there are some plot holes that need to be filled
| Phillies2 chapter 4 . 3/17/2017
I don't understand why he's mad, No Jurisdiction? Then why are they there in the first place? Also, they're Unspeakable's, It's not like they will go out of there way to tell everyone they killed the Death Eaters
| Siri.Silverstorm chapter 16 . 12/31/2016
You can't end the story here! You gotta keep the story going! On another note, the story is really good. As I've read the story keeps getting better and better. You are extremly good at letting the readers know whats going on, and you are really good at keeping track of all of the extra scenes, like the dark lady ones and the Bellatrix ones. Great job, please keep it up
| Books85 chapter 16 . 12/31/2016
The missile launcher wouldn't fit in the suit! What a line! I confess to having an abiding fondness for Dobby. He was dealt a bad hand in canon, and I really enjoy seeing him deal with the bad guys.
| berend van den akker chapter 16 . 11/8/2016
Nice book, very exiting. What are you going to do with this book, is this the end or is this book going further than this?
| LordofKhaos chapter 16 . 10/7/2016
Well I hope you continue this story
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/14/2016
Might be just me but if they're trained as unspeakables with skills that seem comparable to a black ops military squad one might reasonably assume that they wouldn't be stuttering so much no matter the emotional situation. Other than that little pet peeve of mine I think the story is good.