Reviews for Into the Fire
DaLiza chapter 19 . 9/30/2008
Love the image of Brennan with her arms around his waist, comforting him, and Booth's hand finding hers. Beautifully written!
DaLiza chapter 18 . 9/30/2008
Aww, so cute! How very thoughtful of Booth. :) Loved it.
DaLiza chapter 17 . 9/30/2008
Laughed at Brennan not understanding "I'll be back" and Booth's reluctantly agreeing to go to a veggie restaurant. Well done!
DOC3 chapter 19 . 9/30/2008
Wow - this was a punch in the gut. In a good way. Would love to see this role reversal play out onscreen. Great job!
DOC3 chapter 18 . 9/30/2008
Aww... this one was so warm and fuzzy - loved it!
DOC3 chapter 17 . 9/30/2008
You make this scene seem so realistic, I feel like I just saw it on tv. Great work!
DOC3 chapter 16 . 9/30/2008
JynxGirl chapter 19 . 9/30/2008
I think this is the sweetest ficlette I have ever read. :D
labsquint chapter 19 . 9/30/2008
I don't review drabbles by and large because there is simply not enough in such a short piece to really grab me. So if I ever do comment on a drabble, you know you've really hit it out of the park, at least as far as I am concerned.

And you have here. Right from the title, where you use a legal term to express their relationship, how they freely give to each other, to the moments through time that have turned their working relationship to a tentative friendship, then to a deep friendship and then finally to something that teeters on the brink of something more. It's gorgeous.

I like how you've used real examples of how Booth is there for Brennan, but then branched off into potential future possibilities for how Brennan would be there for Booth. You've picked an appropriate type of case - the death of multiple children; worse, the death of those without families - for Booth to really stumble over. It's a lovely, emotional moment when she knows him well enough to track him down and then, uncaring of the fact that he is hot and sweaty, she wraps herself around him because she doesn't have the words for him, but knows that he will get her message loud and clear by her physical actions.

"This is who they are now; this is who they’ve become." - this tagline, used twice is very effective. Once for Booth, once for Brennan - they both feel it and they both know it's true.

Very nicely done.
boneskittie chapter 18 . 9/30/2008
I'm glad I read these backwards. I love how you can make me go from crying in 19 to a big smile with this one. Sweet.
boneskittie chapter 19 . 9/30/2008
Oh, you made me cry. I LOVED this one. I was just thinking the other night that the show needs to write one where he leans on her, begrudgingly.
fanofbones chapter 19 . 9/30/2008
damn, what a beautiful and sad picture you protrayed.

You always leave me with these beautiful images and my mind swirls to create and let me see all the 'what ifs'...

lol, that was deep for me, but I hope you know what I mean...

the swirls for that last line, I can live with that fits...

fanofbones chapter 18 . 9/30/2008
Not me! Sorry you're sick, feel better soon...

This was so simple and so sweet...lovely as ever...

brighten my day...

midid chapter 19 . 9/30/2008
Both chapters were great! I love these short little stories that mean so much. Great job!
HawkAngel XD chapter 19 . 9/30/2008
aw... yeah, that's it... really cool...

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