Reviews for Caught in the Rain
ami chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
this is well written and without many grammatical mistakes, which is super. the story seems intriguing, and i encourage you to keep writing, and i will keep reading.
ItsAfricaHot chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Critique

Story: Caught in the Rain

First off, I like to say that I really like this story so far. The story flows really well but I liked it when you switched up the point of view even though it confused me for a minute.

Keep up the good work!
srdfgchvjboguvjh chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
i like the last line, but i don't really understand the piece.
winglessfairy25 chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Hmm. This is very intriguing. I love AU stuff so I'll be really looking forward to more. You should get a high grade for this.

Erinn
Apathetical chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Awseome!

If the teacher didn't give you a good grade on this let me know, I'll punch her in the face for you!