Reviews for Everything Falls Into Place
mariacullen chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
Can u please put story on wattpad cause I can read without internet
mariacullen chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
Great story can u put it on wattpad
highlander348 chapter 15 . 3/4/2014
Bella is such a Mary Sue.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/22/2013
That's terrible I mean 5 whole era then he just randomly, stupidly dumps you?
WTF!? Boys are imbeciles for being absolutely blind to EVERYTHING. Ugh!
BELAVERA chapter 5 . 5/13/2013
As far as the issue of writing out Josephine or Jo, well I've been there and done that. You have my sympathy!
Izabella.Grace chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
This is my story so can anyone who see it review and see how im goin
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PS
i LOVE YOUR STORY
ilovedthis chapter 16 . 1/7/2013
this was so good write more of this please ?x
ElizabellaLove chapter 5 . 9/14/2012
:)
ElizabellaLove chapter 4 . 9/14/2012
... You are just full of surprises :)
ElizabellaLove chapter 3 . 9/14/2012
O.O
ElizabellaLove chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
... ROFL... I thought it was Jacob XD
ElizabellaLove chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Hmmm...
Crystal chapter 16 . 8/15/2012
I always thought something like that in my mind. You are a good writer. Thank you for writing it. keep it up. Best of luck for the future.
Hemeophage chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
Good story so far but vibrato? You said "I yelled once more with as much vibrato as I could." what does that even mean? Vibrato is the wavering of sound such as when someone sings. You don't have vibrato when you yell. That doesn't even make any sense. You only have vibrato or tremolo in your voice when you sing. You should rephrase the sentence to, "I yelled once more with as much strength as I could." sorry didn't mean to rant but next time look up some definitions. Maybe you should get a beta - they help with that kind of stuff.
Sato Kazemaru chapter 16 . 4/5/2012
i love the store, iv reread it about 3 or 4 times so far, and i'm gonna keep rereading it till i commit it to memory.

i love it,

i love it,

i love it,

keep up the awesome work, im gonna go reread it again, XD

Cocoa, your fan.
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