awwwwwwwwwwww, that was just so adorable. I love Soubi/Ritsuka. The ending was my favorite. *squeals*

KYA! THAT WAS GREAT! VERY FUNNY! I LIKED THE LAST MOST THOUGH! IT WAS SO CUTE! :)

this is really awesome! the story is totally in character, I could easily imagine this happening in the series. and the last part where Soubi starts to laugh is excellent! I love this story!

aw this was cute, poor ritsuka got scared by the zeros. now were all those spelling mistakes part of the story or would you like some help?

. ha ha soubi playing pretend so innocently i thought he'd be more like ill be the Irresistible collage professor and you can be the hot new boy that all the girls fall for but what they don't know is that your gay and in love with me. D and then Ritsuka would be like NO. seriously NO

Oh my god! I just... ADORED this D I was gonna quote bits but it just ended up with about thirteen quotes so I gave up... suffice to say I loved it all _ It was so cute.

that was really really cute :)

Aw, this was absolutely adorable! Hahah, I love the Zero boys. . They'd make good pirates.

AW that's squealy-fangirl-ish adorable!

awwe! *hug* cute. The SoubiXRitsuka thing was adorable, goo'job! But how did Ritsuka get from Soubi's place to his place in just a towel...?

Ritsuka has a blue bath towel wrapped around his waist that hung to her shins...

Change *Her to *Him.

I thought it was soo cute. x3

But maybe a litle bit out of character.

I liked the ending.

...

A lot

._.

-Sir Real.

Ok, so that was seriously hilarious. i luved it!