Reviews for Pretend
Pleasing.the.Yaoi.Gods chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
awwwwwwwwwwww, that was just so adorable. I love Soubi/Ritsuka. The ending was my favorite. *squeals*
777angeloflove chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
victoria85 chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
this is really awesome! the story is totally in character, I could easily imagine this happening in the series. and the last part where Soubi starts to laugh is excellent! I love this story!
loretta537 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
aw this was cute, poor ritsuka got scared by the zeros. now were all those spelling mistakes part of the story or would you like some help?
Rabbit Of The Aurora chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
. ha ha soubi playing pretend so innocently i thought he'd be more like ill be the Irresistible collage professor and you can be the hot new boy that all the girls fall for but what they don't know is that your gay and in love with me. D and then Ritsuka would be like NO. seriously NO
101fingertips chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Oh my god! I just... ADORED this D I was gonna quote bits but it just ended up with about thirteen quotes so I gave up... suffice to say I loved it all _ It was so cute.
loveless Flo chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
that was really really cute :)
s-chan.the.insane chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Aw, this was absolutely adorable! Hahah, I love the Zero boys. . They'd make good pirates.
Raze Occam chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
AW that's squealy-fangirl-ish adorable!
StoryofGreen chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
awwe! *hug* cute. The SoubiXRitsuka thing was adorable, goo'job! But how did Ritsuka get from Soubi's place to his place in just a towel...?
Sir Real chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Ritsuka has a blue bath towel wrapped around his waist that hung to her shins...

Change *Her to *Him.

I thought it was soo cute. x3

But maybe a litle bit out of character.

I liked the ending.


A lot


-Sir Real.
XOiHeartMiloOX chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Ok, so that was seriously hilarious. i luved it!