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Stargazer chapter 4 . 1/1/2009
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KitsuneNaru chapter 4 . 4/19/2008
Yes, interesting.
keikew chapter 4 . 4/18/2008
Ahh, I love this. So the Hebi aren't downright psycho or evil are they? Sasuke still sounds sane and not too revenge driven. I'm quite happy for that. XD Canon Team Hebi and Sasuke saddens me, even though they're cool. Anyway, they're going to somewhere "quieter" to "talk"! I'm very happy for that and am anticipating it. D I hope to see an update soon!

On constructive criticism, this isn't very constructive but there were a couple of typos- that, I know they're pretty trivial and I'm never really bothered to edit for typos either but I thought I'd just mention it. Also, I'm glad that Sakura and Lee are official. XD Go Sakura and Lee!

It would be interesting if Naruto's article sparked a debate. However, if this were ever to happen in real life, people would just start talking about how it has no evidence whatsoever and all. It's more like a theory than it is a news article. Well, a news article on a theory, and see how many people buy it. I think you should concentrate on how the media can control the minds of the audience. It would be interesting, how you write this kind of manipulation of people's minds.

The plot aside, I'm also looking forward to moar SasuNaru interaction. D "Quieter" and "talk" always sparks the imagination. XD Please update soon!
cranberrysoup chapter 4 . 4/17/2008
Okay, so I totally had a moment where you said "the five of them" and I was like... 'wait, five? But there are four of them... oh, shit. Juugo.' He's such a pity bear.

Just a few technical things here: for one, Sasuke's media rant was strictly textbook. I mean, yeah, the guy's smart, but you kind of expect him to dumb things down at least a little bit for the rest of the idiotic world. Also, two grammatical typos. Shikamaru (talking about Sasuke's effect on people) says "Once glare" or some such thing. And Sakura, at the end, says "going to be interestingly." But that's pretty much all the imperfection that I saw.

Ah, Tsunade... she's so very intense about her work. You'd think she was running some sort of espionage organization or something...

I'm going to write a song about a "face-full of door and a broken heart." And it will be titled: "Your Song" and you can tell everbody that it's your song because it will be. And there will be manpotions up the shiznat.

If I was a sculptor... but then again, no.

TinySai will eat your brains.
yamisxn chapter 4 . 4/17/2008
Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! I bet Itaci will go after Naruto now... I wonder if Sasuke planned to use him as bait? I can't wait for them to start liking each other!
blugirlami21 chapter 4 . 4/17/2008
I thought it was great, I wish you had written more. It's nice to see how Sasuke and Naruto's relationship is already developing and the whole Akatsuki murders subplot is very well written so far and I love the that the people who discovered their bodies were often the ones that killed them in the manga. I see Kakashi, is Iruka going to be making an appearance in this story? I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
SyaoranDazzleChic1 chapter 4 . 4/17/2008
Overall I think this was a good chapter, I think it could have had more in it (maybe a little longer), but still good. I cant wait to see what happens next so Please Update Soon! :-)
SyaoranDazzleChic1 chapter 3 . 4/9/2008
Cool story so far...and I cant wait to see Naruto's reaction, Please update soon!
KitsuneNaru chapter 3 . 4/6/2008
Update ASAP!
ddd chapter 3 . 4/5/2008
Oh no! Itachi!
cranberrysoup chapter 3 . 4/5/2008
Uchihas aren't allowed to smile, but can't they be allowed to smirk?

Ah, Juugo. What a guy. How did a poor little fella like him end up with people like that? Does he still have freakouts now that he's a (relatively) normal human being? HOMG, was his mother like, addicted to PCP while she was pregnant with him?

That was a misleading chapter title, by the way. Kisame shark. Suigetsu general fishyness. But I guess that sort of misconception can be understandable.

Uzumaki Naruto... got it memorized?

Sasuke and his purple rope... man, it would be awful, but we can just remind ourselves to be thankful that it's not a butt-bow.

Nice chapter! And yes, meatybones really are attractive. I might even be with you in the Kanky-pants boat, were it not for my total weakness for androgyne. If you update early I'll, um... give you a cookie? Yay?
keikew chapter 3 . 4/3/2008
This is getting so interesting. I wonder what Konoha and the Hebi have to do with the recent murders of the Akatsuki members. Hebi seems to want to get to know Naruto to get more information. It's interesting. And Sasuke you liar! Stop toying with Naruto! Meh... childhood friends my ass. XD

Well done!
greatstars chapter 3 . 4/3/2008
Wow this is so interesting. Modern Sasuke and team hunting down Itachi and killing Akatsuki. Well that's not confirmed, but I'm sure Sasuke is the reason Deidara is dead. The others, not so sure- Sakura did find Sasori, and in the manga she was the one to kill him, but who knows for this story yet- not enough info. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I hoep it comes out soon! If Naruto prints this article saying Itachi did it, Itachi will probably go after him- and that's probably Sasuke's plan, to use Naruto as bait... I hope the next chapter comes out soon!
Frosty Pig chapter 3 . 4/3/2008
Even though Naruto is a bit too much OOC for me, I really like this. And I am so happy you included Juugo and Karin and the rest, finally someone who is using new characters! This is just so interesting, I was actually surprised by what Sasuke wanted from Naruto. I cant wait to see where this story is going!

(btw, my favorite character is Juugo! _!)
Panda-Pigeon chapter 3 . 4/3/2008
update asap! it is getting So good
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