Reviews for Ike's Bruise
Seiichi Ryota-kun chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
XD LOL ARE YOU SERIOUS!? Hahaha!
dnomy chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Secret are to remain secrets or every thing gets weird. LOL
eyabayeya chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
HAHA! Lol, hickeys...
WoofBlackHayate chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
XDD Oh man. Poor Ike.

Very funny! I had a giggle fit. X3

Hayate
ZawehZaweh chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
I didn't comment on the other stories, but since this was basically the end of it, I have to comment now.

Fantastic, wonderful, gorgeous, and sexy. The first one, with them fighting, was nice and some good insight on their personalities and such. Idle Time was yet again amazing charactization, great writing, and sexy beyond belief. I swear.

Now THIS was just hilarious. A good way to see AFTER the fact. But I can't help but like to see these ficlets turn into a real story, it's practically a proverbial goldmind of ideas for these two. xD They may not be from the same world, but with the right writer, it might make people go " Hey..this might actually wor. o_O ". Just throwing that out there.

Also, Pit's 'after the fact' would be cute too. xD Imagine, him limping around, and everyone just smirking at him. But mess with Ike first, just for the hell of it about it.

...I have talked alot, SORRY. Your stories just were so great. You have no idea how long it too me to FINALLY find a well written fic. D:

...I'm done. For real. I'll go away now. xD
Felix Falora chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
*whistles* Go Pit.
Shamanic Shaymin chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Silly Ike, this is why we look at the mirror when we're fully AWAKE. :p
GintaxAlvissForever chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
ME: LOL! Last line was great. -gives a thumbs up to Pit- Good job Pit!
Shadow Dragon13's the Devil chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Wow, good start. I can tell this is going to be good. Please update soon.
RcA chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Hah! Cute. Pit wasted no time in marking his property, did he? ;D
an awesome blossom chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Haha, the last couple of lines totally made this. Good job!
kingdomhearts222 chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
LMAO! HAHAHAHA! He didn't look in the mirror? XD Ike is so silly. I love Pit for what he did to Ike.
MimiB.Real chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
...*snerk* Ike should pay more attention to these things.
Flare Dragoness Reshiram chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Wait... Pit gave Ike a...

*dies laughing*

Pit you naughty little thing!
Serpent P chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Lol Ike epic failed.

Nice writing, xD
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