Reviews for Fullfledge fist fights
Bored Secretary chapter 2 . 4/10/2011
Nice, I like the set up of the two-shot. The fight was good, but could have been a bit longer. I like your style of writing :)
Dragonslayer92 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
LUV THIS STORY MAKE IT INTO A SERIES !
pageleaf chapter 2 . 5/2/2009
Oh my god, Fang and Max are so emotionally awkward. They would totally settle their problems with fist fights. They probably do, often.
maxluver369 chapter 2 . 6/25/2008
dude.

this was good.

it had a few typos though.

that was good when they spied on em at the end.

good story overall.

you should write a 3rd.

:)
i-love-emmett-cullen chapter 2 . 4/14/2008
awsomness. Keep writing!
Wait For The Stars chapter 2 . 4/14/2008
The first chapter was better than the second, but the whole thing was really...sweet. Yeah, I think thats the word.

The fist fight was actually the best part of the story in my opinion.

Smile D

Wait for the Stars
SE chapter 2 . 4/4/2008
Hey! This is awesome!
linen-and-curls chapter 2 . 4/3/2008
:) i'd prefer if it were hate love, smexyness in the midst of a battle ;)
mac chapter 2 . 4/3/2008
im a girl write more i love this stroy so far

fly on
Amethyst-Violet chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Whoa I was not expecting the violence

But... it works actually

Hmm I like it because Max is very reluctant to talk about her feelings with Fang in the books so I like how that stayed the same here :) I like it
Pegasus6644 chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Pretty good! I liked the tension. Please write more!
crazy.girl.with.wings chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
that was cute. you should definately make it a two or three shot.
AvanJogiaLuver chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
FINALLY! SOMEONE ELSE THAT HAS READ THE 4TH BOOK! I BOUGHT IT THE FIRST DAY AND READ IT IN 5 HOURS! Anyway good job!
soccerchick9417 chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
that was funny. definately a two shot. :)
HI chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Great story plot i really think u should make this a 2-shot.A place that Max & Fang can go to talk is the cave that Nudge & Fang stayed in in the 2nd book (if you need an idea)