|Reviews for Emotions|
| Sentariana chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
It was Funny, stupid, totally rude and disrespectful all in one. Here's some advice for you; If you want to make a decent story use good grammer-like speachmarks and a new line for a new speaker, improve your spelling, stop swearing, and get a better storyline. You've got imagination- use it.
I don't mean to be mean but that story had loads of space to improve. Try reading other peoples stories and books-it'll help loads. I should know because befor I started reading I couldn't even spell 'because'.
| Fen-Wolf chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
1. This isn't a fanfiction.
2. You can hardly call this 'Digimon' since it only uses several of the characters and thats it.
3. Its dreadful, really.
4. You obviously wanted to write up something about them breaking up so you could throw in the song but you did the breaking up in such a truly terribly way.
5. If you plan to write a 'fanfiction' next time, make sure its a fanfiction.
6. This is the worst thing i have ever read, really.