|Reviews for A Jeweler's Perfect Combination|
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 9 . 4/5/2009
I loved the mention of the calligraphy; I can definitely picture Marik doing that.
And I love how Marik remembers Ishizu's words. And ooh, good use of foreshadowing!
| Rugrat247 chapter 9 . 4/4/2009
It wasn't schmaltzy. It was cute! I loved it _
| searing light dragon chapter 9 . 4/4/2009
| PsychopathicPrincess chapter 9 . 4/4/2009
aw that was cute
no denying that she wrote the letter
can't wait to read more
update soon :D
| The Whispering Wind chapter 8 . 2/7/2009
This one is my new favorite! It's so beautiful; like poetry. In fact, it's god a Shakespearian quality to it. I especially liked this phrase: "Hours after his initial surrender to sleep’s calmly persuasive offer..." Like lyrics to a song. Wonderful!
| The Whispering Wind chapter 7 . 2/5/2009
Golden Trust. What a wonderful description. Again without fail: an amazing chapter!
| The Whispering Wind chapter 6 . 2/2/2009
"Composure loss". That's hilarious!
What a great chapter! You're such a great writer. I don't know what it is about your style. I've been having a bad day, but not so much now. No matter what, your stories always seem to cheer me up! Thank you.
| The Whispering Wind chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
Phew! I'll have to take a look at PR - 'cause that's quite a ring!
I love this! It's so mysterious! I can't wait to find out more; specially about Filiron.
| The Whispering Wind chapter 4 . 1/29/2009
Like the others, I love it. Ha ha, poor Marik, no matter how much he wants to deny it, he has a warm heart.
I have one bit of criticism: it feels a bit rushed to me. Other than that, it's amazing!
| The Whispering Wind chapter 3 . 1/27/2009
Ha ha, she's already undermining his defenses. I like Filiron's character; even in Oneshots where she wasn't as present as Marik or their daughter. Loving Jeweler so far!
| The Whispering Wind chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
This one was amazing! I never get tired of your stories - never!
So that's how they met, eh? Interesting!
You're amazing with dualities. I like how you make them similar, though different (like two sides of the same coin). You know, as well as I do, that fire burns. Oddly enough, ice can burn as well (when touching your skin for long periods of time). I feel that about them when I read your stories; they're fire and ice.
| The Whispering Wind chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
This, just like your Prompted Oneshots, was fantastic!
It's odd; I started from the end and now I'm going backward. For some strange reason it's ten times more exciting than starting from the beginning and watching the story evolve!
| Violet Phoenix Rising chapter 8 . 1/14/2009
Nice. Keep up the usual good work.
| Rugrat247 chapter 8 . 1/5/2009
Haha! I liked the last sentence. It was short, but stil good
| Rugrat247 chapter 7 . 1/5/2009
Another great chapter. Great description! Aww, Marik's so cute. I'd get a headache with all the thoughts going through their heads