|Reviews for A Jeweler's Perfect Combination|
| The Whispering Wind chapter 7 . 2/5/2009
Golden Trust. What a wonderful description. Again without fail: an amazing chapter!
| The Whispering Wind chapter 6 . 2/2/2009
"Composure loss". That's hilarious!
What a great chapter! You're such a great writer. I don't know what it is about your style. I've been having a bad day, but not so much now. No matter what, your stories always seem to cheer me up! Thank you.
| The Whispering Wind chapter 5 . 1/31/2009
Phew! I'll have to take a look at PR - 'cause that's quite a ring!
I love this! It's so mysterious! I can't wait to find out more; specially about Filiron.
| The Whispering Wind chapter 4 . 1/29/2009
Like the others, I love it. Ha ha, poor Marik, no matter how much he wants to deny it, he has a warm heart.
I have one bit of criticism: it feels a bit rushed to me. Other than that, it's amazing!
| The Whispering Wind chapter 3 . 1/27/2009
Ha ha, she's already undermining his defenses. I like Filiron's character; even in Oneshots where she wasn't as present as Marik or their daughter. Loving Jeweler so far!
| The Whispering Wind chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
This one was amazing! I never get tired of your stories - never!
So that's how they met, eh? Interesting!
You're amazing with dualities. I like how you make them similar, though different (like two sides of the same coin). You know, as well as I do, that fire burns. Oddly enough, ice can burn as well (when touching your skin for long periods of time). I feel that about them when I read your stories; they're fire and ice.
| The Whispering Wind chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
This, just like your Prompted Oneshots, was fantastic!
It's odd; I started from the end and now I'm going backward. For some strange reason it's ten times more exciting than starting from the beginning and watching the story evolve!
| Violet Phoenix Rising chapter 8 . 1/14/2009
Nice. Keep up the usual good work.
| Rugrat247 chapter 8 . 1/5/2009
Haha! I liked the last sentence. It was short, but stil good
| Rugrat247 chapter 7 . 1/5/2009
Another great chapter. Great description! Aww, Marik's so cute. I'd get a headache with all the thoughts going through their heads
| PsychopathicPrincess chapter 8 . 1/4/2009
aww so cute!
can't wait to read more!
update soon :D
| Rugrat247 chapter 5 . 1/4/2009
Great chapter. The ring. Good idea.
| journey maker chapter 8 . 1/3/2009
I love this story.. I love the part where Marik wondered if she would be the one to save him for his solitude, maybe soon he'll find out.. Please update when you can..
| Rugrat247 chapter 4 . 1/3/2009
'Great. I just happen to have a coat on me, and it’s just started raining. What is this, a romance novel?' I had to laugh at that. Yes, it is indeed a romance novel, Marik! I could just imagine him thinking that oh so bitterly XDD!
Another great chapter! _
| Rugrat247 chapter 2 . 1/3/2009
Awesome! I loved this
I laughed when he paused and said 'for her eyes' instead of 'courage' XDD! Haha.